rate_review Reviews

the way i was brought up this story would be a good story not the best because it can grow but it definitly has its bases covered. the two biggest things in my eyes are already done, the events which are very realistic (or as realistic as things can get) while having the characters do things they dont usually do. and their is alot of energy in the story so it makes it fun to read all it needs is a little lengthening out because everything is happening quickly no back story nothing the only thing i could think to say to help is lengthen it and use the emotion you invested in the rest of the story to keep it interesting

THAT WAS FUCKING HORRIBLE!!!!!

Hmm... Good. But, IMO, Shinji\'s one-liners were off-the-wall-corny and outrageously OOC. Other than that, it was some really good Shinji/Rei. But where\'s the backstory? How did Shinji get to the point where he was on top of Rei in bed? Maybe you meant this to be PWP.

If not PWP, I say keep going. Could always throw Asuka in there and do what might be the first AFF Shinji/Asuka/Rei threesome! lol

(Disclaimer: I said \'might\')

Not to bad. I hope you keep this one going.

I really enjoyed it and I hope you\'ll continue this story.