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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just have to review this again. I really did like how it was constructed, and the pairing could not have been more hot. =3 Even though it was revised, there was still quite a few grammatical errors. One error resulted in you typing in the other's name instead of the one intended. But that didn't deter me at all, and barely even confused me. A damn good fic, and still one of my favs to read.
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh.....*drools* Kizna and Zero....*licks lips* Such a succulent combinatioin. I love, love, love the fact that Kizna has them cat ears...and it makes her even more sexeh!!!
*ahem*
Anyways. I love the way you conducted the story. Just a tiny bit OOC, but the anime and OVA was never very elaborate on some of the deeper emotions that everyone felt.
Good job and keep up the work. =)
-Narshe Delvar-
*ahem*
Anyways. I love the way you conducted the story. Just a tiny bit OOC, but the anime and OVA was never very elaborate on some of the deeper emotions that everyone felt.
Good job and keep up the work. =)
-Narshe Delvar-
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. Actually the only Zero/Kizna lemon here on AFF.net but eh, what to do? kepp writing great stories like that
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice one!Good luck on your endeavors