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for Secrets of the Heart

by Crya2Evans

person Merinda Watson
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i say follow the saying. AMOR VINCIT OMNIA "love conquers all."
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whew! Glad they made it. Fight scenes are hard for me to take. I have to skim through quickly to see what happens first, and *then* go back and read normally. Good job. I don't think I could write a believeable fight scene to save my life!
person Kelly
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved everything! Well, except for the "Ice Princess" comment. It just kind of threw me off. I'd had preferred it, if you used prince instead of princess. :\ Now, on to more compliments, because I truly do ADORE this fic. ^^ I loved the whole, making love in the hot spring thing. That was incredibly cute! XD
You rock keep it up, and please do try to finish it in 2 weeks. Though, I don't want you to rush through it. Take some time to get it beta'd, it'll only make it greater than it already is. :)
person sennin
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am not sure why I just found this story since I am on this site constantly. I just read 1-9 in one sitting. I know I have no life but it was REALLY worth it. Keep up the good work. Please don't abandon this story. And now I am going to go check your Inuyasha stories.
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Girl, Sara III is all *your* fault! You put peppermint oil...somewhere and a little lightbulb went off in my head. So I put ginger...somewhere. Thanks again for the inspiration! ;-)
person kimper
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nicely Done! I can't wait to see what happens next!

kimper :)
person Lumivalkea
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First time reviewing your work, but I have read all your Samurai Champloo stories have posted here so far, I think.... Absolutely loving them, keep up the good work, do continue this story!

I haven't dared to write SC myself yet because I just don't trust myself to characterize Mugen, hehe.
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Horray! More smut and yummy mush. What a great way to start the new year. Thanks for posting!
person SpBuffy
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still loving the story and I thought the fight scene was just fine. Too much detail on those scenes can sometimes become more of a distraction so...good work. Looking forward to more.
person Kelly
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a sequel! I have to say I am quite impressed with this fic. I adore Mugen and Jin's relationship, and how Fuu is portrayed. Please don't sell yourself short, you are a very good writer, you shouldn't make negative comments about your work! ^^ I thought that fight scene was excellent, and very discriptive. Keep it up, love! ~_-

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