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NYAA!! no tez-ei lemons?

anyways... you should continue this, hoi hoi! m(o.o)m because there are a few plot holes...
does Fuji get his ass kicked by tezuka? or better yet... does Fuji get his ass kicked by Eiji!? (envisioning eiji, with kitty claws, scratching furiously, mostly missing...) or does Fuji just back off and get the fucking picture, nyaa?

wow... i got distracted... DAMN YOU ADD!!! {rawr} m(@V@)m >_> riight...

er... post another chapter, and add a pretty eitez lemon... mmm... lemons....
better add sugar to sweeten it and water it down a bit, so tezuka isnt kinkily ooc... to make the perfect lemonade!
er... wait... what?

Hey....great story!!!! I was hoping that you might be continuing it or already have at another site.....i really want to find out whats going to happen....please e-mail me at dementedrose@hotmail.com to tell me what your plans are for this story and your other one straberries and cream...i really liked them both.....

thanx

OMGODDESS!!! How can you make Fuji so meeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnn *cries* We love Fuji!! *we're discussing it as I type this review that we like Fuji!!* lmao it's cute though about Taka hookin up with him..but damnit he' such a bastard in this fic!! but that's ok... cuz this is a fic, and you can do that ^__~

hmmm why was tezuka oka-san so grim??? especially if taz was being released?? hmmmmmm??? *shrugs* find out later, nya?!

and pooooooooooooor oishi!! everyone is so mean to him...not givin him the time or day! *le sigh* gotta give oishi some lovin in the next chap ^__~ ....and we should really like, get on the ball of his first name so when we do the name game on the way to and from work we can actually include him in *rofl!!*

annnnnnnnnnywho...i so didn't realize you had up'd!! why didn't you yell at me and smack me about it?? like...all you had to do was lean over like...one foot to get a good smack on me *ROFL!!* sooooooo anyways...*heart* ya!! until the next chap *hugs*

-General O'Chibi Nicaru Houseki

yatta!! ore wa seme!! *cough* just had to remind ya real quick ^__~

lol, aaanyway, yay finally a new chapter!! wooot!! i looove how you write eiji dude, i love how he got out of bed acrobatically, i love that he had toothpaste on his chin and his mom had to wipe it away!! it's sooo eiji!!

and eep the reappearance of fuji... and taka-san!! lol dude, even though fuji's a bitch in this, and definitely quite a bit insane, i still love him :p and his comment about liking to call take "take-san" was very fuji i think

and dude!! lmao on inui explaining he couldn't have blocked the sunlight.. he will have more cameos later, nya?? and then wooooot!! tezuka-buchou is baaaaaaaaaack!! run those laps, puny minions, run!!

*cough* and you KNOW i will die crying if you stop here!! you don't want that do you?? DO YOU??!!

inne, you do not!
praise POT (cuz i am lazy lol)

mata dane
~ crys

I've just finished reading your story. I really enjoyed it and I like the idea of pairing Kikumaru with Tezuka.
Fuji as an evil chatracter doesn't disturb me 'cause it was really difficult for me to decide whether he was good or evil when I first saw him in the anime.
So I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter...

After reading this.. I felt rather disguested. The characters weren't in character what so ever. Fuji.. would never hit Eiji ( unless he desevered a good slap for some thing bad he did or to snap him out of it. So the slap was okay. Because Tezuka and Fuji belong together.. Unless you fill it with a good alternit pairing like Ryoma, for ether one.), let alone any one else with a tennis raquet.. or be so vengful. You make sweet Syuusuke.. look like a physco! With Tezuka.. He has an iron thick demonor.. he wouldn't have such a emotional dialoge. Also.. Adding the crazy fan girl with her shuichi shindou tasts to the story.. was un-needed and a waste of space. I could hardly see Tezuka in love with a slaker, let alone a woman he's only knowen for a short time. Also I find your pairings to be in bad taste.. but thats my personal opion. Your story doesn't stay on track ether.. and the ending was lacking. I'm sorry to be so harsh.. its just.. This whole story angered me and annoyed me. At least I read the whole thing..but It was a waste of time really. *shrugs* I hope Your nexted one will be better.

woooooooooooooooooot!! they're back together already!! omtezzie!! *glomps ren and showers her with kisses* yay!! and momo/ryoma!! lol, ryoma's total reaction/comment/serious/blank face towards momo when he told him he was hot, haha dude, SO RYOMA!! lmao and i KNOW you know :p i know you don't want to have a sex scene with SUCH a minor and that's fine, but a bit of momo/ryoma fluff is much appreciated ^__~ they're hella cute.. ahhhh that was a great couple of chapters!! i can't wait for more!! i wonder what fuji will do now.. i worry for eiji all alone at school...

*shouts* atobe and kabaji for joint treasurers!! taichi for secretary!!

~ crys

Erm, can I say that Eiji and Fuji are best friends, and not romantic rivals in the least. This fic was good, until you made Fuji go psycho. He\'s my favorite charactor, and I can safely say that he is crazy, but not that crazy. Fuji hitting Eiji with a racket is not cool, and Fuji would never do such a thing.

you are soooooooooo mean to my TAZ!!! *cries* ahhhh but an eiji/momo pairing is kawaii..just wish it was on diff circumstances! totally liked the switch of roles from every day life to being in bed..kawaii ^__^ aiee poor momo too now finding out about their relationship..and grr to fuji for showing up! what nerve!!!! it\'s funny how of all ppl you will leave unhappy, is our god :|

ah well...at least in the end, he\'ll pull out my number and give me a call and find true happiness once and for all ^________^ love ya ren! motto soon!!

aaaaaahh pooor tezzie, poooor eiji! lucky momo and the angsty-over-compensating-eiji sex ^__~ eeeevvviiillll conniving fuji!!! waaaaaaahhh i need morrreee!! waaah i hope eiji and tez get back together! and now... i\'ve cried almost as much as eiji and tezzie have.... fitting, nya? *cries more* more! now! i demand it! muwahahaha!

praise the trinity+moses-eiji+st. yukimura

~crys