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Dude, WTF! Why didn’t Hakkai come clean and tell him it wasn’t a dream now that he knows that Gojyo wants him just as bad? He could have had it any time he wanted then! But now I know why Hakkai bottomed. A sore ass would have been a dead give away. Really well written, but I want to know what Hakkai’s motivation was. Maybe he didn’t think Gojyo was ready to accept their relationship since he’s still chasing floozies. Oh well, it *is* a PWP I guess. It’s just that it leaves questions that I’d like answered. Very good.

*Giggles* I LOVED it, lol! So Hakkai to make the poor bastard think it was a dream, heh. Great job, Gracie. Except for orbs. The orbs irked me slightly. A fanfic called \'Breakroom\' by KarotsaMused over on the baby version of this sight, FF.net, is probably the cause of that, lol.