rate_review Reviews

That ending didn't really fit into your story and truth be told it took away from the quality in my oppinion. I was thoroughly enjoying it but it left me with a heavy heart when it was so uplifting for the most part.The Yuki you made him out to be wouldn't cheat like that or have such a drastic change in character so soon, even if the real one might. Choosing to have this gravitation shuxyuki probably wasn't the best idea since you had to have Yuki so out of character. Actually everyone was. Besides that I really did enjoy it up until the end of the wedding. I really would like to know why you chose such a depressing end.

I loved this fiction, I now believe in happy endings.Thanks! This was very well written and so sweet.

first chapter read.....first chapter loved..... looking forward to next chapter very much!

I loved your story and i liked the ending especially because i wasn\'t expecting it. You are very talented at writing and i believe you should continue on the story. I would also like to know when u do or already did so email me the name of the storie.


Raven

That was quite an unexpected ending. I have a question, can guys get pregnant in Yuki and Shuichi\'s time? Overall, thank you for the great story. Even though Yuki end up treating Shuichi badly.

how about calling it No such thing as a happy ending

or something to that extent it would be good if it tied to the frst one and i hope you podst it soon

Authors notes review: Argh.. cutting and humor eh? maybe the sequel will have a happy ending, neh? Titles: Til death do us part, In sickness and in health (since Yuki has to be sick to be cheating on shu!), A fairy tale that wasn\'t meant to be, argh.. I suck at titles!

Next fic pairing: SHU X YUKI!!!! If you do it AU/OOC, then you could have Shu be seme and dominate! :) yay!

-Mega ultra supper flying cling- OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!111oneoneshift. Jaya is, like, so happy =D OMG! It\'s seems good alreayd Dx Shuichi on the brink of a suicidal roller coaster! Woooooooooo! I love fics like this :3 they always make me cry. Call it \"The Unknown\"..............=O Sounds mysterious for a not so sure title.....xDDDD

I want to see yuki and shuichi together. hiro and ayaka it\'s ok, toumas and mika sounds good, ryuichi and tatsuha that\'s great. I wish u did not have shuichi cutting that suck a lot. So that means yuki it sleeping with women and not toumas i hope so. Because toumas rap him at the party and yuki sleeping with him that\'s enought to make me have a break down lol. Let yuki be a womenizer plases

NO noonononononononono!!!!
How could you?!!! How could you make it so sad and upseting!!!
AND HOW COULD YOU MAKE YUKI CHEAT ON SHUICHI!!!
ok, so yeah, Yuki\'s a bastard, we all love him for that, but he\'s not a cheater!!!
Mean
You sooooo have to make a sequel, b/c really, it was sad!!!
I did notice the whole, protect his stomach,
I don\'t think a preg fic would be too bad...just...outta the ordinary, you should try and find a way to explain it so it doesn\'t sound off.

SEQUEL!!!