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Hey i like the story till after the honeymoon. But what happened i feel bad for shuichi and I hope u do the story on it but make it another story that goes with this. I want to know who yuki is cheating with and how it happened and is he and shuichi going to work their problems out. pleases plases plases do it.

Oh... you better make a sequel to that. That was really sad *crys*

pls make a sequal i love the story

oh wow. *sniff* that was a sad ending.
the wedding was great
how romantic.
but like i sad, the ending was sad
poor shu
let me guess.....tohma?
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!
you better make a sequel!
please, i need you make a sequel.

Chpt 10 post script via reviews: OMG.. please do NOT let shu be pregnant.. that is such a cliche overdone bull shit thing (at least with your story set in the future you could TRY for believablilty of it via technology) but again.. please DONT write the sequel if its a pregnancy bullshit.. I too noticed the stomach thing and tried to pretend it was just sensitive.. maybe Shu is sick and Eiri is trying to move on and not allow himself to be hurt by him? ... Oh BTW I saw how you said they were only happy a short time (paraphrase) or that their time of happiness was so short.. good slip in to warn of the ending!

You said, you\'re prepared to be yelled at... well, I won\'t yell... But I do DEMAND that you get your but moving and wirte a sequel! There are to many questions open!

Why is Yuki cheating on Shu, if he loves him so much, like he claims he does?

Has this something to do with Touma?

Why does Shuichi automaticly protect his stomach? Is he pregnant or what?!?

Well, I\'d be happy to find a sequel to this story sometimes!

Love
Lord

that was depressing. thanks.

OMG please do a second part!! you can\'t just leave it like that!!! please!!!!!! ^_^

More~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please

Chpt 10: Ok, I\'m not sure what to think. That was a definantly unexpected ending. I will have to go back and look for the \'clues\"... I guess saying \"its too good to be true that Yuki was nice\" is a way to look at it. How much time has passed to \"present\" I mean did Shu have a few years of happiness or was it over as quickly as it started? I would LOVE a sequel to see what happens.. my vote is for evil Tohma, it would be kinda funny in that Tohma would get Yuki in the end instead of the other way around where Shu normally comes back after a long time and Yuki dumps whoever he is with for Shu (in other fan fiction I mean). Either decision you make, please write more, you are a very talented writer!