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Thart sure was an unexpected ending, but then again not everything does end happily ever after unfortunately. It would be great if it did, but that\'s not how the world is...*sigh*. I would love a sequeal, but as a writer, I know how hard it is to come up with one. So, your choice. I would love to see what happens, but it\'s fine as is as well.

Thank you for writing this story. I enjoyed reading it. The ending makes me want to see Shuichi leave Yuki behind and have Yuki realize what an idiot he is (sorry...I\'m just so typical). I don\'t know if I just mistook the whole part about Shu protecting his stomach...but I kind thought that he might be pregnant. A sequel to this story would be greatly appreciated.

very nice story i liked it alot...the ending was really sad...i think a sequel would be awesome u know so it kinda shows the hardships they later go through and stuff id love to see that well keep up the great work hope to read more from u soon...

It\'s strange....oO; I actually enjoyed the non-happy ending. Maybe because it\'s different. It just fit so perfectly. Such a twist (: Will you be making a sequal -prays- Please D: Your story was amazing

hey gotta say i love you story


not thrilled with the ending but a sequle would be great then we can see what happens but oui what a turn there

Please make a sequel to this story. It was soo good, that it deserves one. And honestly, you have to make it happy, because the story was just too awesome to not end happily, they both deserve it. At least EXPLAIN why Yuki turned so mean. I hope he changes in your sequel, or that would be the biggest let down in a long time.

I love this story. Its so unique.

I love how you use the rest of the cast as Shuichi\'s brothers.

But you have mentione dthat Yuki has two brothers one is Tats...can\'t spell and who is the other.

Will Ryuichi be making an appearance?

Chpt 9: wow.. this story is AMAZING.. I love it so much even though normally I hate future stuff (then again we are just focusing on Shu and Yuki\'s relationship which is so cool to have NICE yuki.. and I love the innocent shu! Now I\'m really curious to see where this is going.. you\'ve avioded all of the plot elements that would have turned the story (Yuki fighting Tats or Tohma.. or misunderstanding and hurting Shu).. maybe it will be Shu who misundestands and leaves Yuki and is the bad guy? I hope not.. maybe this can just be a happy story and they can love eachother and get married and live happily ever after! .. Also have you considered posting on site: fiction DOT gurabiteshiyon DOT net -- its a kickass gravitation archive. FFnet will not like your adult material.. Liked the lemon it was graphic enough but not overly so. Liked the lube comment!

Thank you thank you thank you for the update. I throughly enjoyed this chapter. Poor Shu-Chan, he lost his family, Yuki\'ll make it up to him ;)> This is a great story I can\'t wait for the next chapter.

Just caught your fic and fell in love with it immediately. Can\'t wait for the next update.