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for Breaking Point

by DQBunny

schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I wanna read more!
person momijik
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great story. I got a lot of laughs out of this one. I especially loved Gourry's line. " I walked in at a bad time. I need to take walk. Or get drunk. Or both."

That one had me laughing for a long time.

I'm off to see if I have read all your fics yet. :)
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cute; I like. =]
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, the little hentai in my was little disappointed, but other than that, bravo. Extremely well written and you kept them admirably well in-character. I also appreciate that you didn't make them jump at each other right in the first scene, but waited and build up more tension. Waiting makes it sweeter :)
By all means, you should continue this.
person Lill
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
person Steffie
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm....lemony goodness.

SO! I haven't reviewed this one (here) and wanted to say that yes, I still enjoyed it, and that the last line still makes me sporffle.
person RVincent
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story started out a little jerky in the begining but quickly picked up and the content was great. It\'s so rare to get fanfics in this vein and I enjoyed it throughly. Please write more! I loved the ending too, hillarious! Too bad this whole \"Insert Disclaimers\" thing is going on right now and forcing this gem to the bottom of the list, once it\'s all through you should consider just updating it and changing a word or two to bring it back to the top, it deserves a good look from all the Slayers fans around here.
person DQBunny
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! I\'m hoping that it won\'t be a one-shot, I\'ve got ideas on how I want their relationship to end up. I\'ve just got to make the second part as believable as the first, and so I want to take the time to do it right.
person nonengel
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice job, I hope this wasn\'t a one shot, your portrayal of the characters worked well

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