rate_review Reviews

Your fic made me laugh. Alucard's hilarous...totally in character too. I can absolutly see him saying those things. I always pictured him as your wrote him. Great job!

Fantastic! I like your take on Alucard, it's nice to have him sweet and emotional for a change. I think Alucard's not as evil as people make him out to be, he's not so bad.
Anyway, great fic, very well written with plot and character adaption. I liked that you didn't make everyone so serious. There were some spelling errors, a quick look through on spelling errors would be good.

I\'m enjoying this very much. I had to stop after your prologue however, because I was hit by a plot bunny, and I didn\'t want to go any farther in your story yet for fear of ending up with something derivative of your work. When I\'m done writing my story, I look forward to coming back and finishing reading this.

What I\'ve seen so far does need a proofreading by a third party. You have some word misusage such as: To young to die, to old to live forever. Which should be: Too young to die, too old to live forever. It\'s a relatively minor issue in many instances, but when writing for other people to read, those things can snowball into more than just trivialities.

Don\'t let that throw you, though. I still enjoyed what I read, and I intend to come back and finish the story. That\'s a lot more than I can say about many of the other fics in the Hellsing section of aff.net. Good luck to you with your writing.