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heh. love the endless smut but does this mean there won't be any ys???

Chpt 7: Hey Mindless smut is always a good thing.. it was nice to see an update on this story :) Dominate Shu is always AWESOME! Thanks for posting!

fina-fuckin-ly!! omtezzie dude, i'm so glad you finally were able to post it!! when nic told me she read it already i was SO FUCKING JEALOUS, OMFTRF!! yeah, i know not much plotness this time, but hey, a chapter full of smut is gooood tooooooooooo ^__^ especially when it involves ryu and shuu and role playing and shuu saying he's staying!! (lol i'm a poet, worship me :p) aaaanyway, omt, yuki uke!!! and lol, suguru likes peach ponta!! and the scene with ryu and shuu explaining the new arrangement to kuma and kiku was too kawaii, which of course you know :p aaahh write the next one soooon!!! *begs*

*one vote each for akutsu and kirihara* *nominates atobe for treasurer* *suggests kabaji can be his lackey and bully dues from people*

*glomps and huggles ren*

~ crys

Please update.......I want to know what happens......please don\'t quit in the middle. I want Ryu to keep Shu. Yuki\'s ...oh well!

AAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sweet Yuki!!! *glomps the shit out of Ren!!* YAY!! doood sooo naughty of Yuki..playin that trick on Touma *smirks evily* but dood major awwwwwwwwwness if Shuu leaves Ryu *cries* even though i\'m rootin for Yuki/Shuu it\'s still sad for Ryuichi *pouts* they all just need to end up together hehe..of course Touma will be left with no one..fuckin bastard :| hehe

gah dood i know it\'s gonna be awhile until you up\'d but omgoddess you need to sooooooooooooon!! i wanna know what happens *cries* not like i couldn\'t like...poke it out of ya...since you\'re like...sittin next to me and all *laughs madly* hehe anywho...after POT you\'re workin on this babe! that\'s an order!! muwahaha!! *cough*

anywho...work work work...*snaps whip* Hoowa! *laughs like a dork* .... OTAKU!

ok i better stop before you try to like smack me for laughin while you\'re workin on pot *smiles like a taco*

huggles and love!

Nic

This is a really great story please keep going would love to read more...I like the plot..thank-you for posting and writing this

I love this story, though I gotta say I *hate* Yuki/Tohma fics. Anyway, I hope everything works out for the best. I know how I wan this story to end, but as a writer myself, I know that these things write themselves and some times it does not matter what we want. Anyway, can\'t wait for the next chapter.

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!!! *cries* you little tease, what\'s his answer??!! *cries more* tezzie damn, that was a great chapter.. full of juicy bittersweet angst.. dude, the shuu/yuki scene made me feel teary, and it was so sweet and sad... and yuki not wanting to swallow for touma when he did for shuu was sweet too... and damn dude, yuki hella schemed to find ryu\'s place!! but dude, i\'m STILL all gung-ho about ryu/shuu, despite you continuously pulling at the heart strings for yuki/shuu!! kikumaru the cat is purrrfect heehee, and the ryu/shuu scene was soooooo hot *drools* needy-lusty shuu being dominant-uke *oooooohh* poor ryu, he knew something was wrong...hurry and put out the next chapter so i don\'t hafta be in suspense so much!! *poolyeyes*

praise tezzie, ryoma and fuji, mada mada dane!

*huggles*
~crys

Cliff hanger!!! Argh! I really want Shuichi to stay with Ryuichi. I think that it\'s really courageous of Ryuichi to show Shuichi the othet side of him. I do hope that that decision has not worked against him. more?

me: What an interesting story! I love Eiri bashings!! >D

Alter Ego: Ok, don\'t go spazz on us now...

me: DIE EIRI! DIE!

Alter Ego: Too late... T_T

Me: Anyway, the choice is obvious my friend-Ryuichi!!!!!!! He\'s sweet and funny! Beside, ya gotta love the ability to go from chibi-mode to intense mode in less than a second.

Alter Ego: I have to agree with Mr. Stupid over here. Personally, Eiri needs to quit acting like a spolied brat jacka-

Me: EGO! 0,0

Alter Ego: and stop abusing the poor kid. Oh, and other me, I can swear all I want, thanks.

Me: Meanie. Anyway, Shuuichi should end up with Ryuichi! Cause he\'s cool! ^-^

Alter Ego: You done ranting yet?