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for A Mangled Affair

by loche606

person Houseki
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yuki/Shuu!!! for sure! ,ah poor yuki is so deoressed and in love gah give him his shuu back!! *cries* yaay to yuki for callin out shuu\'s name both times, crying, AND sleepin on shuu\'s side of the bed!! yuki doesn\'t always have to be an ass yaayy!! lol

gaah! hurt touma!! he is evil! and shocker on the friendship..wow. lol ryuichi is so sweet...but shuu belongs w/ yuki! ryu should go hook up w/ tats: or K ^__^ hehe love it doll! motto!

nic
person sansty
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAA I REALLY LOVE THIS FIC! I WANNA READ MORE!!!!! WA
person Quichi
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really think Ryuichi x Shuuichi is sweet. I could really care less who Yuki or Tohma ends up with, the way they\'re acting. So long as they stay out of Ryu and Shuu\'s way. They are so obsessive! They need to get over themselves. Or all over eachother. Either way.
person Ray4Ever
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I definitly want Shuu to end up with Ryou who treats him so much better and I think Touma should end up alone. He\'s too nasty and deserves it. Maybe Yuki can meet an OC and do things right and they\'ll be happy together. Hiro and fujisaki make a good couple.
person ladygizarme
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waaaaahh!! i loved it! poor yuki! omtezzie, yuki-angst!! this chapter was sooooo great! ryu goin off on touma, touma *finally* gettin some from yuki, then havin it IMMEDIATELY taken away by yuki callin shuu\'s name!! nyahaa!! ryu tellin shuu it\'s not an act w/him *awwwwwwhearteyes* and, of course, the random suguru/hiro scene!! i love his nightly ritual! and his stepstool! heheheheheheh now, where oh where did ryu go hmmmmm??? hope you write the next chaper soooooon *glomps*

praise tezzie, the trinity, moses-eiji and st. yukimura!

~crys
person Shiba
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well i finally took the time to read this (after i read the first part like a week ago) and i really really liked it ^^ i cant wait for the next chappie but please try to hurry with it!!!
person ladygizarme
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* pullin the heart strings again... now i\'m all \"ohh poor yuki!!\" *cries* and i am SO gung-ho for ryu/shuu, yet you know just the strings to pull lol... but anyway, of course i LOVE the suguru/hiro randomness, and that sugu would be seme in the relationship, despite being smaller (yay for breaking yaoi stereotypes) cuz he is SO the dominant one dude i swear... lil touma jr lol... also, looooved the ryu/shuu fluff... and ryu\'s line!! “If that happens when I wear your clothes, I am gonna wear them every day.” heehee anyway, ooooh touma gonna come into the ryu/shuu scene next? eeeep!! can\'t wait to reeeeeeeaaaaaaaaad iiiiiiiit!!

love ya! (praise the trinity, mada mada dane)
~crys
person Houseki
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh you made a sweet yuki!! and a mean shuu!! er ryu!! lol this was another great chap...my yuki cried!! *cries with yuki* shuu will come back, hopefully! umm...wow, i\'m trying to think of all the things i totally liked about the story, but as you know, i\'m drunk, and now everything is escaping my mind, hence why i\'m writing this in IM and then going to paste into a review later when aff is up and going again *smriks* ahhh ok umm *think think think!* heh randomness w/ sugaru and hiro again lol but it\'s fun..randomness is good, hell that\'s what icaf is about, randomness ^_____^ the lil show ryu put on, oh yeah baby, how kawaii was that? lol and shuu talkin to kuma-kun??!?! *laughs* ohhh soo fun! nice lemon babe...keep em comin!! so, all in all...i love you i love your fics and i love you. so get over it ^__~ *scrunches nose* there was more i\'m sure that i wanted to say, but...yeah maragaritas are hitting me good now haaaha *cough* wow why do you get sleepy from drinking? no good! my turn to write!!!! lol gah ah well, as long as you and crys put out the fics then that\'s good... hehe ok i\'m gonna go now before i keep on ramblin even though i\'ve done done that now *cracks up* boobs and bear dood boobs and bear! *hugs and cuddles and kisses and much much more ^__~*
person Houseki
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh yes, another great chappy from my favortie Ren!! *huggles mah girl* Lemony goodness...must love! Ah! Bad bad BAD Touma!! He put Ryuichi up to all this! Shame on him! The bastard! Yuki misses shuuuuuuuu *awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww* Even though I hate cliche\'d endings, I still want you and me to get back together babe...the music is much more sweeter when it\'s the two of us *giggles* Can\'t wait to read the next one! Hop to it! Your mistress says so!

*hugs and kisses*

Nic
person swyen
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love it! wonderful, spec-fucking-tacular, please continue :)

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