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for A Mangled Affair

by loche606

schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay, i loved this chapter toooooo, especially the ryu/shuu fluff (of course :p) and ryuichi\'s telling shuu i love you in all those languages *so sweet* and esp the vulcan lol!! but the random suguru scene was shibby too lol, i can just *see* him gettin a chill over touma scheming heheh and of course you know i *love* his cocky eyebrow! and then to have it all come back to touma even planning THIS part of it nyahaa!! it\'s perfect! and it\'s sweet that you added the lil bit of touma wondering bitterly when the last time he and mika\'d slept together was.. lil bit to remind us that somewhere within that tasty scheming body there actually IS a heart :p i can\'t wait for you to write the next one ren!! *glomps and begs with pooly eyes*

love ya, praise ryoma (and, yes, tezzie of course... and fuji ^_~)
mada mada dane,
crys

oh yeah, we up\'d both our gravifics the same day lol, how\'s that for awesome
person Houseki
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Doooood!!! Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww I love mah Shuuuuu!!!!!!!!!! woooot hehe I so love Ryu and Shu\'s interaction, tis too kawaii man. I can\'t believe Touma sucked Yuki off!! Ahhh! lol Crazyness! Story is getting very very interesting ^___~ Get that next chap out girl! Can\'t wait to read it! Love ya!

Nic
person Ashcat
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chpt 2: Woah.. interesting to say the least! So now Yuki loves him.. but he had to abuse and rape him? Sigh.. him and Shu both fucked up! Maybe they can work it out... without Ryu and tohma\'s \"help\"... Can\'t wait for the next chapter - please update soon!
person ladygizarme
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol dude, i take full credit for the inclusion of ryu/shuu fluff!! wooot, it was so sweet *poolyhearteyes* and of course you know i loved the squirrel attack part heheheh (you better know, you HEARD me laugh :p) and damn dude, hotness and you knew i wanted yuki/touma too, but you didn\'t give touma ANY lol, yuki got off though heehee, evil fic-ka you >:) that was great!! gahhhhhh i can\'t wait for the next one.. i really wonder what you\'re gonna do cuz damn ryu\'s just so loving to shuu!! but yuki all realized he really does love him, despite it all, and that\'s sweet to... so damn i\'m all torn on what i want to happen lol, so you need to WRITE it so i don\'t hafta worrrrrry anymore haha *glomps you*
person Anon
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can u explain what really happened? did i miss it?
person Diety
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was amazing. I can\'t wait to read more and see what happens.
person kagomegirl
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow heavy stuff update soon.
person Nakazaki
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome fic~! please update soon, dying to find out what Yuki will do
person Houseki
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*glomps mah ren* ooooh!! Dood that was an excellent chapter! So glad you are continuing this, and I wonder what you\'ve got up ur sleeve next! Mean ol\' Yuki! Gah, hate mahself haha But I hope you make me a nicer person lata, ne? Ne?! I liked when Yuki told Shuu that he would get to see what it was like to be powerless....but if you think about their relationship, Shuu is always powerless *sigh* poor Shuu!! lol ok I\'m just rambling :p Time to put up chap three chica! ^___~ Taz, Ryo, and Fuji forever! Mada mada dane!

Love,
Nic
person ladygizarme
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
daaaaamn dude, hotness(i\'m so bad :p) but poor shuu, i\'m so glad ryu came to rescue him!! i was like \"yay, shuu\'s knight in pika pika armor\" heheh, and the note was perfect ^__~ can\'t wait for the next installment *ahem* love ya, praise tezzie, mada mada dane! *glomps*

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