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YES a threesome without 2 dudes

Please refrain from Internet slang; it like someone said, makes the story dull and not worth reading. Otherwise, the lemon was good. Please rewrite it and make it not in script format. Make it a story format after all, it's story we're looking for, not movies.

are u going to do a part two

it was a good idea, an oral threesome with Ash, Joy, and Misty in the forest...nicely done on selecting the scenario and all but why did you have it in script format and have little to no adjectives? It wasn't very arousing because this was in script format and because your adjectives were absent and things went too fast and straightforward.

Nice try and nice scenario but wrong format, descriptions, and flow...

sorry, but keep trying

Internet slang makes for subpar stories.