rate_review Reviews

Whoo! I must say that this is pretty good stuff you got here. XD

Just so you know, I've never had an account on here before. But this story made me actually want to go and create an account just so I could review it. I don't think I've ever read a story- let alone one that was smut-based and had no real adventure/plot or anything- that made me want to do that.

So, basically what I'm saying is that this story is good. I mean reaaaally good. And I've read a lot of stories- lot of smut stories, I'll admit. Hey, I've got needs! But this story... I mean, I was still blushing and going 'Whoo!' the next day! I remembered a scene from it while was at work and my manager asked if I needed to sit down. She said my face was all red and that I looked feverish ^^;;; There's never been a smut story that did that to me before. So I officially rank this, "The hottest story I have ever read, ever" ^_^v

You did perfectly with the reasoning on why Syaoran had to be the one. Most authors seem to just pick two characters and claim they always secretly loved each other. You even managed to keep the canon intact- enforced it even- while doing the hottest sex in a non-canon pairing I've ever seen. On top of that, I loved your progression from pure lust to actual emotions. It came through very well.

Anyway, that's about all I can say. Keep writing ^_~

oooooooooooooooooooo!!!!! This was reallllly good!!!!!!!!!! Please make it into a mini series!
Thank you!

jfskdhafasjd! So good! Generally the idea of Syaoran/Kuro squicks me but ohhhh myyyy gooood this was amazing. And I was able to ignore the KuroFai angst until the very end and then my brain turned to keyboard mash. I wanna know what happens~! -pleads- Please update soon!

oO? Are you actully going to contoule? If so I am very intreasted in see where your going to tack this. Please email me if you do. AngelicChaos81@yahoo.com

ok, i know i am asking a ridiculous requests for a yaoi writer, but maybe from the first chapter you could maybe write a fai/sakura pairing.....im sorry that is my favorite straight couple in this one but i would have to say that fai/kuro-tan is my favorite yaoi! so please oh please write a fai/sakura?!

This is so adorable! I love how you've stuck with the character's personalities, even as non-canon I find it completely believable. You have a real gift with words. I was especially fond of the way Kurogane saw Syaoran as a wolf cub, with "his legs and paws too big for his body". That is exactly how Syaoran acts with his determination. :D I am so glad that I came across this fic. It wasn't a pair that I would think of initially, but I think that it has a lot of potential in that sexy mentor-student kind of way. Best of luck in all you pursue!

This story is fabulous. I really, REALLY hope you consider continuing this piece some time soon.

thank you~! you updated! i just love your way with words, you make them flow so smoothly and it just makes the story so right. rabyuuuu~!

Yeah, a new chapter. I am so happy! It's an usual couple, but it's well done and I simply love it. Please do continue!!