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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The voice you put into your words and the words you chose are strong and connotative for the short story. I can tell from reading "For Friendship, perhaps" that you have a passion for writing and the purpose behind why you decided to take time to develop such a story. Your devotion is a wonderful thing to see, and maybe it is not such a bad idea to perhaps have a career in literature. You most definitely hold the talent and passion needed for such a goal and with such qualities one can make anything come true. Good luck with your future writings and be sure to stay determine in whatever you do.
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a very good read. Kurogane and Syaoran is actually my favorite Tsubasa slash couple, and since it's difficult to find good stories about these two, I was pleasantly surprised to find this. A sequel would be really great - who wouldn't mind a little mpreg? *heh*
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes, this is gooooooood i always think syaoroan would make such a cute uke
continue pleasssssssssssssssssssse i want to see kuro\'s pov!!!!!!
continue pleasssssssssssssssssssse i want to see kuro\'s pov!!!!!!
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mpreg is good 4 me... I LOVE YOU!!! I have never seen a Kurox Syao pairing anywhere!! It\'s like the perfect pairing dammit! It was great! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! continue!!!!!!!! A sequel would also be GREATLY appriciated!
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was a really beautiful story. thanks and keep up the good work!
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m actually very OTP about Fai and Kurogane so I was kinda against this from the get-go but ended up really liking it and not only because the writing is damn good but also because it just makes so much sense :P You managed to stay very true to the characters and avoided all the usual cliches attached to them. The story just works so well. In most fics Kurogane comes off as a grumpy weirdo who has nothing else to do than be angry but you really fleshed him out believably. Anyways, I\'m bad at reviewing, but this was very lovely and if it\'s not too much trouble, write some KuroFai too ^_^
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story :) Very bittersweet and sad... But hot too. I would be interested in seeing Kurogane\'s side to the story, how the situation must have tore at him... And I\'d also like to see his reaction to Syaoran telling him that Fai is in love with him, obsessive KuroFai shipper that I am XD Plus, I\'d just like to see more Tsubasa yaoi ^^
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yummy! i liked this story. i liked it\'s original feel and it\'s yummy yaoi! (applauds) great job and i look forward to reading more from you. till next time, ja ne~
~hanyou-elf
~hanyou-elf