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awesome, I love WA!

My oh my!! Like I say!!! There should be more Wild Adapter FAMFICS!!!!!!!! BRAVO!!!!! (crowd cheering)

I really liked this! Excellent emotion and good capture of the characters. I particularily liked the ending.

hey hey! i hardly see a WA fanfic. this is good =) by the way, i have one too, on ffnet. http:// www. fanfiction. net/ s/ 3454094/ 1/ i don't know if the link won't work like ffnet so i'm separating it just in case. cheers!

...I love you. because you write W.A smut....and it was GOOD smut. Not some half assed crappy shit. -Worships.-

Yay! A Wild Adapter fic! And a good one, too. :)

YES! WA YAOI!!! this is what i've been waiting for ;_; thank you.. it was great!!!!

wah! You already know I love this fic, but I\'m telling you again. I LOVE IT. <3 You write them so well, with all their inflections and rhythms, I can hear them speaking as I read. The fact that Kubota reacts so much (well, \"much\" for him - racing heart, etc - though still subdued reactions since he\'s Kubota XD) is just as eeeeee-inducing as the smut for me, showing how much Tokitoh affects him. Kubota\'s perviness here is great too, keeping the condoms from Minekura\'s fic on him, waiting for the opportunity to strike. XD I thought Toki accusing him was good too, didn\'t break the mood for long but made it feel more like them. (Lots of authors seem to think nobody talks or laughs or anything during sex I think, which isn\'t true.) I also like the line with Tokitoh opening one eye, then the other - Minekura loves to draw her characters with one eye squinty, so this makes me totally picture him doing it. The smut is lovely - it wasn\'t too much for their first time, still keeps that sort of fragility between them that leaves us sighing. And the ending is so fabulous, him losing his place in the book ties it all back in to the title and his usual multi-tasking mind, and how Tokitoh takes all of his concentration. *loves* Keep writing these two! <333

grrrr, aff ate my review!! Well, I\'ll try and remember it all.....

You know I love this, but I\'m telling you again. *big hearts* You write them so well, you\'ve got their rhythms and inflections down to the point where I can hear them speaking as I read. Wonderful how you illustrated how much Kubota reacts to Tokitoh in this (well, \"much\" for him - racing heart, etc. - though still subdued since it it Kubota XD), much more than he did with others. Kubota\'s perviness was great here, I love that he kept the condom from Minekura\'s fic with him, waiting for the opportunity to strike. XD Nice also that you had Toki yell at him for it, didn\'t disrupt the mood much and made it seem even more like them. (Many authors seem to think nobody talks or laughs or anything during sex, which isn\'t true.) I liked the line with Tokitoh opening one eye, then the other - Minekura loves to draw her men all squinty-eyed, so I can totally picture Toki doing this. The smut was lovely - not too overboard for their first time, still manages to keep that sort of fragility they have with each other that makes us sigh over them. And the ending was wonderful - him losing his place brings it back to the title and Kubota\'s forever multi-tasking mind, and how Tokitoh requires all his concentration. *loves* Keep writing these two! *goes to make fanart*