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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is an awsome fic! ^.^ I love it! Oh please tell me you plan on writing more to it! pwease! I love how the reader can put themself in the story, very imaginative! very well done. <33
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s cool and all, but you really need to start a new paragraph when it comes to a new idea/speaker. It\'s all jumbled and kind of confusing to read. =-S