rate_review Reviews

Of ANY lemon I have ever read (be it from Inuyasha, Rurouni Kendhin ect.) this is THE BEST I have ever read. Your story has feeling, and it's not empty. It has beautiful descriptions, without using words that take the tone away. I never liked using the word 'penis' or 'pussy' in a lemon. It doesn't sound like a story, they would make it sound like something from a porn magazine. And I love how you put in the character emotions. Angst, love, lust, insecurity, happiness, ect. Oh, and for making Aoshi smile. Big thumbs up for you!!!

You were right in your self-assessment; very good, tastefully done. I loved this! No neglect to the emotional aspect, none to the physical aspect. I like ~.^<3

OMG OMG OMG!!!!! That was one of the best blanket scenarios i have ever read!!!!! I love that pairing!! It\'s my absolute favorite!!! Great job!!!

I hope that the lack of reviews is only due to the fact that many have read and reviewed this story on other sites, because it\'s definitely one of the rare good fanfictions around. I like very much Misao\'s portrayal and the A/M confrontation in this first chapter. In particular, Aoshi\'s stupefaction when Misao confronts him rings totally true and in character (OTOH I would have seen Aoshi more sensible about using body heat to start with). The beginning of the lemony action is hot, the story is well-written and the description of the cabin and the settings are thought and rather realistic (well, as much as they can be in a blanket scenario). I liked the dust detail, for instance, and the discovery of the cabin. I\'m looking forward to reading the other chapters: it\'s nice to read a good fic about one of my favorite pairings...it reminds me of a lost time when most RK fanfictions were of this quality.