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January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
...I feel talented. Very talented. I just KNEW that when Eiri was reading the chart that it was not Shuichi.
Now I'm off to read the rest of this~!
Now I'm off to read the rest of this~!
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*claps for the ending and smiles* Wow. I loved it! So unique and original! And plus you did all those chapters on spur of the moment without planning. I bow to yuo for being a very good writer. *bows* Can't wait to read the sequal.
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June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This story is amazing. Professional quality. I found myself unable to stop reading it. Even when I was at work I was wondering what was going to happen next and would Yuki ever find Shuichi and be with him again? I finished it in two days which is fast for me with all the stuff I have to accomplish.
I noticed that about half way through the America arc, when Yuki was in the hospital with who he thought was Shuichi I started thinking, this doesn't really seem like Yuki. Not like the Yuki from Gravitation. This is the Yuki that everyone wanted from Gravitation. I have to admit I don't think the Yuki from the story would have gone that far. But once I realized that, I was able to adapt my thought process and enjoy the story even more. It no longer seemed like an extension of Gravitation, but more a completely different and beautiful love story with similar names and faces.
I loved the ending. Although it left me with wanting more of the story (and I noticed there is a sequel) I thought it was nice to end it where you did with Shuichi seeming much more mature and in control of his life and emotions, but still willing to give everything for Yuki.
I didn't like Annette. I think that any Shu/Yuki fan would want to strangle her. I understand why she was there and it wasn't like she was a bad person but I breathed a sigh of relief when she didn't follow Shu back to Japan. I also really really enjoyed Ryuichi's interaction with her. He wasn't actually mean to her at any time but he told it to her straight, then sat back and comforted her while she was in pain. It was a side of Ryu that I had been waiting for. I had never thought of him as completely stupid. I often thought his entire child-like nature was just an act. And during that scene where Shu leaves Annette I really felt satisified that you had brought that out in Ryu.
I found the crossover between Fake and Gravi a little much. I love the cast from Fake but it felt like two worlds collide and I felt it distracted from Yuki's desperation to get to Shuichi. Suddenly there were these other two characters and I sort of put Yuki's story on the sidelines to watch Ryo and Dee in action.
How come in 41 chapters there was only one sex scene?????? I was really hoping that after all that time when Shu and Yuki got back together....well maybe in the sequel. You write sex so well it reminds me of my romance novels. Its so refreshing after reading a lot of low quality fics that you can be mature about it yet graphic enough to really make it fun. If you haven't yet, you should write romance novels. I think you would do really really well in that field.
Well time for me to get to work. I so enjoyed this story and I can't wait to read more of your work.
I noticed that about half way through the America arc, when Yuki was in the hospital with who he thought was Shuichi I started thinking, this doesn't really seem like Yuki. Not like the Yuki from Gravitation. This is the Yuki that everyone wanted from Gravitation. I have to admit I don't think the Yuki from the story would have gone that far. But once I realized that, I was able to adapt my thought process and enjoy the story even more. It no longer seemed like an extension of Gravitation, but more a completely different and beautiful love story with similar names and faces.
I loved the ending. Although it left me with wanting more of the story (and I noticed there is a sequel) I thought it was nice to end it where you did with Shuichi seeming much more mature and in control of his life and emotions, but still willing to give everything for Yuki.
I didn't like Annette. I think that any Shu/Yuki fan would want to strangle her. I understand why she was there and it wasn't like she was a bad person but I breathed a sigh of relief when she didn't follow Shu back to Japan. I also really really enjoyed Ryuichi's interaction with her. He wasn't actually mean to her at any time but he told it to her straight, then sat back and comforted her while she was in pain. It was a side of Ryu that I had been waiting for. I had never thought of him as completely stupid. I often thought his entire child-like nature was just an act. And during that scene where Shu leaves Annette I really felt satisified that you had brought that out in Ryu.
I found the crossover between Fake and Gravi a little much. I love the cast from Fake but it felt like two worlds collide and I felt it distracted from Yuki's desperation to get to Shuichi. Suddenly there were these other two characters and I sort of put Yuki's story on the sidelines to watch Ryo and Dee in action.
How come in 41 chapters there was only one sex scene?????? I was really hoping that after all that time when Shu and Yuki got back together....well maybe in the sequel. You write sex so well it reminds me of my romance novels. Its so refreshing after reading a lot of low quality fics that you can be mature about it yet graphic enough to really make it fun. If you haven't yet, you should write romance novels. I think you would do really really well in that field.
Well time for me to get to work. I so enjoyed this story and I can't wait to read more of your work.
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February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles and wipes away tear* No, for real, I am SERIOUSLY crying! Dammit, there's just some certain fanfics that get to a person, and this one did! I loved EVERY bit of it from beginning to end. Brilliantly written, enough drama, angst, emotion all rolled into one: I was hooked. Took me two days to read it all! Teehee! XD I do hope a small sequel will come out of this or something... that would be too awesome! *LOL* Again- terrific job!
-SD
-SD
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. It was very good company on a lazy Saturday afternoon. It was well thought out, I'm a sucker for angst, and even though the end gave me a cavity (oh so syrupy sweet), it was still great. I will definitely be reading more of your works.
-Jazz
-Jazz
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kami...loved this story...soooooo angst...but that is how you write....I believe you do not write anything but angst...would love to see you go out of your box and write a happy, healthy story...whether its FAKE or Gravitation....sighs...I think Im in love....you are soooooooooooo awesome...so look forward to your updates...but am patiently awaiting an update on Whipser...am I being too pushy?...*shrugs*..okay pushy...update whisper please....catti
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story was the shit! I am starting on the sequel now!~ B reading U!
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg I absolutely love it!! love it love it love it!! *faints*
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dear JadeHeart,
I've been reading your Gravi stories, and I just finished this one. I love your writing style, and story telling. This story was so poignant and wonderful and...yeah I'm running out of words. But needless to say, I loved it.
I also have two questions. One, would you be willing to let me archive some of your stories on my website? It's small, and as of yet not any stories actually up yet. My second question is very different. I was wondering if you would be willing to speak with me about your experience as a fanfiction writer and Gravitation fan. I'm doing my thesis on characters and narrative in fanfiction, and would love to have your input. Whether or not you are interested, however, I would still love to archive your work.
-Dawn
a.k.a. Ashe Crow
I've been reading your Gravi stories, and I just finished this one. I love your writing style, and story telling. This story was so poignant and wonderful and...yeah I'm running out of words. But needless to say, I loved it.
I also have two questions. One, would you be willing to let me archive some of your stories on my website? It's small, and as of yet not any stories actually up yet. My second question is very different. I was wondering if you would be willing to speak with me about your experience as a fanfiction writer and Gravitation fan. I'm doing my thesis on characters and narrative in fanfiction, and would love to have your input. Whether or not you are interested, however, I would still love to archive your work.
-Dawn
a.k.a. Ashe Crow
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! it is the best fanfic i've ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! now, while writing the review after reading i can't stop my tears! and i think i'll cry a half of the night either! i can hardly see the screen because of tears! you described all the emotions so properly and detailed that i thout it were mine emotions! you realy could write a drama novel and it would be bestseller, i'm sure of it! and don't say you are too romantic! after 40 chapters of strained, painfull emotions and thoughts the last one was a breeze of a fresh air, a relief that let my tears flaw! thank yuo a lot for this great job! i bet it wasn't easy for you to write it! just one more time THANK YOU A LOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!