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for The Key to My Heart

by JadeHeart

person Ultimecia029
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I haven't reviewed in a while *smacks evil employer* but I've finally caught up with the story. Yuki seems to be having the worst luck in the world. He's found Shuichi but it seems like the fates are playing screw you games with him. Now he finally has the chance to tell Shuichi about their past and not only does he choke, he embelishes his story.*Shakes Yuki for his stupidity* "Wake and tell him the truth, Annette be damned! You had him first!!" That aside, I love this story and your writing has me hooked. I'm glad you continued with this story and I await the next chapter.

P.S. Shuichi's question about his pink hair made me laugh. I often wondered about it myself.XD
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nooo! so not fair. i think i said it before but you keep proving it true--you are too good at keeping an audience!
person Danielle
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-groans-

Well at least some of the truth is out... that should relieve it a bit, but at the same time Yuki is probably damn-pissed that Shuichi's taking the whole 'fakelovers' thing so... comically...
person the soul
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is good....please keep going would like to read more...
person Reyn
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O Shuichi doesn't remember his pink hair?!? Does that mean it was dyed before he got out of the hospital?!? GAH! You're evil for jest leaving it off like that!!
person stupid little fan girl
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm not much of a reveiwer, but I thought I would review your story because you are one of my favrite authers. I really love this story and I hope my reveiw tells that your a very good writer and to keep writing. Any spelling error are the reader amusment.


P.S. stupid little fan girl
person Rega
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best Gravitation fan fics I've ever read. O.o I can't wait to read more. I only hope the end is happy...meaning Yuki gets his Shuichi back. =^_^=J Keep on doing good work.Love ya!
person Suki
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm pretty new to this fandom, and I just thought I'd let you know that this story has got me hooked. Good job! I'm literally dying for your updates. OK, maybe not literally... but you know what I mean. =) I canna wait to see what you've got in store for us. Hopefully it's some YukiShu citrusy fun! Thanks for sharing, and update when you've got time.
person blue
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm dying in suspense , and will be faithfully waiting for the next update
person Yuki\'s Twin
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank-you for posting the new chapter it is good...would love to read more...

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