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for The Key to My Heart

by JadeHeart

person Sere Eternite
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I totally like this story. I would give it a rating of 10 out of 10! I really like it. Email me by jaguar_of_altair@yahoo.com when u update it!!! I really want more!!!!! PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!
person Reyn
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wah! I don\'t remember this \'New York inci- oh. wait. The fight. I\'m dead tired, so please excuse my flakiness.

For some reason after I read this chapter I had the song \'Crash\' by the Dave Matthews band going through my head. Tohma\'s insight never fails to amaze me. The power he holds is almost scary. Yuki\'s lucky to have him on his side. Very very lucky.
person Reyn
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Trying to protect her from Yuki\'s animal magnetism!! Mwahahahaha! LoL. Jest kidding.

I understand the whole busy schedule thing (Is currently overworking self with a million and two things) so I\'ll forgive you for not updating daily like you used to ^_^

A few things occured to me while reading this chapter and I was wondering if they\'ve crossed your mind as well. The first is the fact that Yuki\'s the one there in the first place. He told Shuichi that his best friend is back in Japan still and that he only knew Shu through Tohma (or was it the band? it\'s late, my mind doesn\'t work anymore). So why would HE be the one looking for Shuichi and not Hiro or maybe a member of his family, or even his entire band (crazy manager and all)? I don\'t know how much brain power you plan on giving Shuichi in the story for this little insight (cuz Shu can be pretty deep when he wants to be), but it crossed my mind, so I thought I\'d point it out.

The second (which I\'m sure we\'ll find out eventually) is what Annette\'s reaction will be when she actually meets Yuki, or at least sees Yuki and Shuichi together. I mean, Yuki already oozes that god-like untouchable status that she got a peek of when Shu was singing, so will she go all breathless when (or if) she meets the blond?

I know there were a few other things on my mind about this story, but I can\'t remember them at all anymore. Maybe the next update, ne?

Oh! And I\'ve got that little ipod oneshot almost done. I had to stop writing it cuz midterms took over my life.rI conveniently stopper right at the start of the smut too. I don\'t know where the smut came from, but it sort of inserted itself in there and now I need to figure out how to get the story back to the ipods....LoL.

best friend. annette\'s reaction.
person Reyn
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(jest realized that was like the world\'s longest review) eh heh...sorry about that. Guess I got carried away ^_^ But your story is so awesome that I can\'t help myself! Oh! And I apologize for not emailing you back (at least, I don\'t think I did). I\'ve been falling way behind on my emails lately because I keep checking them when I\'m busy. LoL.
person Danielle
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*wails* You\'re KILLING me. Every time I read this story I get big, bad, butterflies; just like the ones Shuichi described. I hate Annette!! @_@
person Aurora
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAy!!! You updated. I\'m so happy. Can\'t waite for the next chapters. I was starting to think you were going to stop, that happens everytime i find an awsome story. glad you didn\'t> Hope you get more inspiration soon. I\'ll be waiting> Man your so Awsome.
person chocho
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know who has it the worst. Eiri or Shuichi. And what about poor Annette? Jeeze. I hope things work out for the best. Whatever that may be.
person Aurora
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update. Your killing me with suspense Lol. can\'t waite to see what you do next and looking forward to it.
person Danielle
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No new chapters. =((((
person Reyn
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Hey! I have a question! You\'re little thing about Shuichi owning more than one ipod totally inspired me to write out this idea I now have stuck in my head, and I was wondering if it was alright if I went ahead and borrowed that little quirk to do so. Credit will naturally be given to you and I\'ll totally encourage those of my fanbase who like Gravitation (I mostly write Harry Potter fics) to go and hunt your story down.

I won\'t post the story without your permission, so get back to me on it!

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