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You are wickedly good at drawing out a story line. Too good.
But all in all its going very well. There is a lot of hurt going around on account of Shuuichi\'s amnesia. Poor Yuki. And I think\'s becoming clear to Shuuichi\'s girlfriend that there is just too much goodness and divinity in Shuuichi for her to keep him. Not that Yuki deserves him either but he\'s getting better.
Keep up the good work.

You have to continue fast! I\'m like on the edge of my seat here...

wah! Poor Yuki! For a second there I was worried he was going to lose control like he did back in New York. I\'m glad he didn\'t tho.

Yay! You\'ve updated already. I\'m so happy. Arrrg, I love Shuichi. This Annette is... making me angry. I can imagine how Yuki feels!

LoL. First you take a break from updating, now you\'re updating like crazy! (not that I\'m complaining)

I\'m glad Annette\'s there to at least ease Shu\'s fears away about contacting his family. Hopefully when Shu talks to Yuki tonight he\'ll remember a bit more by jest hearing Yuki\'s voice over the phone. And hopefully Yuki will be over his hangover by then.

I think it would have been interesting if you had, if not written the whole thing in, put in more hints :D! Mentions! *likes long-fics* Methinks too that anything is possible from any angle; mwaha! So you could\'ve had that and worked in some complication and your fic would still be delciously long :3 Of course, those are just tiny details T_T, your story as it is now is just wubble~ Uwah. I feel inspired, I wanna write again because it\'s been a while since I last read a good Gravi fic ;3 Muu! Keep up the good work XD <<-- cliche :O

Moving on, I come back and realize I have four chapters to read at 12 in the evening -- should check site more. :3 Shu is amusing in this state; very... so much more oblivious but not in the cliche\'d way, really, than many of the Shu\'s in the generic \"Shu-brainwashed\" fics. >_O I think it\'s very refreshing to see Shu so... normal but, very, un!Shuichi :O It does make me curious about what would trigger Shu\'s memories and, of course, I have my evil!fangirl!suspicions towards... other things. But, anyway; curious about Annette, for some reason and this whole thing would make for one juicy article when it blows... because I\'m thinking Shu\'s new band will... lead to..other things. I think. *muus quietly and realizes her Gravi-muses are fangirling*

Curious though; aren\'t everyone starting to get suspicious now back at Japan :O? It\'s been a rather.. long while and even with countless relatives aside, show business is show business and no matter how professional they can be, there are some things that you just can\'t hide... So officially, newspapers say Shuichi is fine and rumors are false, but I\'m thinking the people are beginning to think something\'s up :O *babbling randomly* I think Tohma\'s action in your fic is understandable too :O ... he just wubbles Eiri too much to hurt him by sic\'ing the media onto him...

I think I\'ll just sit here and wait for the next chapter. X.x Fangirl mind running off... (I wanna write D:) Off to homework I am :D~ And keep at it >D~

PS, >d *wonders because she can\'t remember if Shu\'s iPod was orange or not*

It ate my review. X.x Half of it anyway. ;_;

*prevents self from falling asleep*

As I was saying; I like Shu! Shu as in the brainwashed!Shuichi very much :D I think it\'s a refreshing take on brainwashed!Shu :O~ Or I probably haven\'t read a lot of that but, getting back; it\'s just neat seeing Shu with pretty much everything core!Shuichi but really just not the memories. It\'s Shuichi, but not. Ditzy, dumb -- not suddenly dashing, dark, brooding, Eiri-like. I\'m a little bit suspicious of Annette but that had to happen, I think. Eiri\'s... inner turmoil is amusing to see though I kind of... lol, feel like laughing at all his angst ^^; Because he\'s so cute when he\'s angsting and you really can\'t call its OOC, and if it was, just a bit because Eiri has... a flair for self-centered angsting *babbling* Or at least anime!Eiri does...It makes me wonder, with Shuichi being at a pretty stable state atm, how he\'ll remember. Because, it just feels like Shu has forgotten quite conviently and doesn\'t have any trauma or anything like that -- like he\'s better off left alone and that just makes it... harder for Eiri. Uwah :O I\'m curious about what caused the crash too and can\'t remember if you\'d addressed that. (I\'m hoping for one Muraki hijacking the plane in hopes of kidnapping Shuichi only to fail j/k) Hoping you can answer those random questions soon with more chapters...

Tohma\'s choice of action was perfectly IC btw, while I think without Eiri in the equation, he would have exploited the media (any publicity is good...) and ultimately killed two birds with one stone by letting the issue explode and then finding Shuichi and restoring him... but with Eiri, he had to consider Eiri\'s reaction... the impact on him. Though, I still, honestly, think those nasty rumor mills and gossippers are smarter ;-) Has anyone begun to get suspcious in Japan? Even if Tohma had Suguru and Hiro on his side, and Shu\'s whole family assuring everyon Shu is fine, that is just as official as an actress going on TV and denying something that everyone just knows is true :O Still, without confirmation it\'s still...a rumor but I would think it\'ll start to get harder to keep up :O Shuichi IS famous no? And in Japan, just like in America, celebs are expected to appear everywhere, everytime, especially when you\'re on top of the charts :O no?

Uwah, that\'s all for now. Will wait for more. I wanna write. Will try homework. *is inspired by your fic to continue writing* One day! One day! X.x

HOLYSHIT.

*wibbles*

I need them to be together! I\'m in tears! Holy FUCK that was, oh god, that was... the single best Gravitation fanfic I\'ve EVER read. You\'re driving me crazy!! I need more. Oh god, please stop tormenting Yuki. I\'m seriously, honestly crying right now. This story is so passionate. I...fucking..love it. Please, please, pleeeease don\'t make Shu take over!!! PLEASE. Oh God, Yuki, I love you it\'ll be okay, I promise. @_@;

Hooray! Another chapter! I took my own sweet time reading it cuz I didn\'t want it to end. LoL. Y\'know, I found it weird that Shuichi would own 3 ipods, considering those things can easily hold well over a thousand songs, pictures, and files (I own one and it currently contains about 200 songs, close to 100 pictures, about 37 files, and finally the entire Sukisyo anime series, as well as 4 episodes of the Loveless series, and it\'s nowhere close to even being halfway full). But I guess Shuichi is jest weird like that.

I\'m suprised Shuichi knows how to cook without blowing up the kitchen! I\'m guessing his new girlfriend taught him that? But yeah, now you\'ve got this idea stuck in my head of Shuichi saying he doesn\'t want Yuki to contact anyone and Yuki actually complying to his wishes and shocking Shuichi. But then that\'d be awful cuz Hiro is sooooo worried!! Oo! 10 dollars says Ryuichi would go to try and find him anyways. Actually, now that I think about it, Ryuichi now lives in New York (that\'s where he went at the end of the manga). I suppose it\'s too late now for them to bump into one another, ne?

AGGGH! DOOD, you totally gotta make him remember. I\'ll cry. Seriously. I feel really bad for Annette, though. And POOR SHU! I mean, how is he gonna deal with it when he realizes he had Yuki as a lover, and now he has Annette. He\'s gonna have to choose. And since he\'s REALLY in love with Yuki, he should choose him. Just my opinion. I like seeing Yuki happy, and Shu is happy when Yuki\'s with him too. It\'d just be wierd otherwise. WOOT! WRITE MORE! LOVE IT!