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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O! Holy shit.... I have missed a lot of chapters.. ^^;;; uh excuse my lanuage. I haven\'t been able to get to a computer in a while.... I go and check this and holy whoa you have like 8 or so more chapters! they find a lead on Shuichi, Tohma heads back to Japan, Yuki even finds Shuichi and talks to him and....Wow!! T___T I\'m sorry it took a while to get a review in >.>
Well to the point! ^^ This is still awesome-ness! I like the direction you have the plot going. Example, you had Tohma head back to Japan, you had Yuki meet up with Shu and I must say you portrayed Shuichi excellently! Not being able to remember and still you leave him with his bubbly personality sort-of O.o;; I also love how you link stuff like from the beginning to later chapter, Like how he brought the Ipod with and uses it later ect... Ouch! Poor Yuki! I could just see you were going to add another person in there that would be close to Shu\'s heart, kinda obvious ^^;; Ayway..the point of this statement is I feel bad for Yuki...
Shu Chan?? LMAO! XD! I love it! That\'s great ^^ I get a kick outta that. Well it seems he now has a lot to consider with Yuki showing up, and I can\'t wait to see where this is going!!!! Well I hope you can find inspiration to update soon! This fic is my ultimate favorite! You\'re awesome-ness! When I get time I\'ll go back and review the chapters I didn\'t review!!! Good luck to the next chapter and thanks for the last few! Reading this has set me off in a great mood! (eh ^^;; sorry this was a lil longer then intended and I ranted more then my share >.>)
KUDOS! ^^
-Ukera
Well to the point! ^^ This is still awesome-ness! I like the direction you have the plot going. Example, you had Tohma head back to Japan, you had Yuki meet up with Shu and I must say you portrayed Shuichi excellently! Not being able to remember and still you leave him with his bubbly personality sort-of O.o;; I also love how you link stuff like from the beginning to later chapter, Like how he brought the Ipod with and uses it later ect... Ouch! Poor Yuki! I could just see you were going to add another person in there that would be close to Shu\'s heart, kinda obvious ^^;; Ayway..the point of this statement is I feel bad for Yuki...
Shu Chan?? LMAO! XD! I love it! That\'s great ^^ I get a kick outta that. Well it seems he now has a lot to consider with Yuki showing up, and I can\'t wait to see where this is going!!!! Well I hope you can find inspiration to update soon! This fic is my ultimate favorite! You\'re awesome-ness! When I get time I\'ll go back and review the chapters I didn\'t review!!! Good luck to the next chapter and thanks for the last few! Reading this has set me off in a great mood! (eh ^^;; sorry this was a lil longer then intended and I ranted more then my share >.>)
KUDOS! ^^
-Ukera
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It\'s so sad.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this fic. That weekend without any updates was hard on me. ^_^
I think at some point, once Shuichi has his memories back, and perferably right after he gets them back, he needs to walk up to Yuki and smack him across the face for that \"a friend\" comment. Cowardly lying bastard!
Also, I hope you plan on resolving a lot of the inserted characters, like Jim (and the cast of FAKE), by the end. I just don\'t like the idea of leaving those guys hanging after they were such a big part of the middle of the story. I also kinda wanted to see Ryo as a (closeted) fan of Eiri Yuki\'s novels, but I guess it was just not to be. ;)
I think at some point, once Shuichi has his memories back, and perferably right after he gets them back, he needs to walk up to Yuki and smack him across the face for that \"a friend\" comment. Cowardly lying bastard!
Also, I hope you plan on resolving a lot of the inserted characters, like Jim (and the cast of FAKE), by the end. I just don\'t like the idea of leaving those guys hanging after they were such a big part of the middle of the story. I also kinda wanted to see Ryo as a (closeted) fan of Eiri Yuki\'s novels, but I guess it was just not to be. ;)
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(glares) You broke your pattern of updating everyday!! I was sitting there for TWO WHOLE DAYS worried off my ass that something bad must have happened to you and then you coming skipping back and continue updating as if nothing ever happened! GAH!
Well, now that THAT\'S out of my system...I\'m glad Shuichi at least feels SOMETHING when Yuki walks away. I mean, back when they first met and didn\'t even know each other, Shuichi felt a whole rainbow of emotions for Yuki. Jest cuz he lost his memories doesn\'t mean he can\'t go through the same thing, even if it is on a smaller scale, right?
Well, now that THAT\'S out of my system...I\'m glad Shuichi at least feels SOMETHING when Yuki walks away. I mean, back when they first met and didn\'t even know each other, Shuichi felt a whole rainbow of emotions for Yuki. Jest cuz he lost his memories doesn\'t mean he can\'t go through the same thing, even if it is on a smaller scale, right?
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! Why isn\'t there a next chapter?! What happened to the button? OMG this is good. I just found it tonight and thought \"Why not? It\'s worth a shot.\" And then - wow. It is soo good. I really like the way you\'ve characterized Yuki. He\'s in character, which is amazing because sometimes it\'s really hard to write angst with him in character. And when you started to mention characters from Fake. God, I went into a gigglefit so bad. Evil, evil author though with that lemon. I don\'t think I even breathed through that last chapter. So sad! I love this story! Keep writing. *bookmarks* You\'re fabulous! I don\'t know if I can stand the wait. ^_^ <3
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn it!! This is so good, its torture! They better end up back with eachother because it can only be ShuxYuki and nothing else!! I <3 them!
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Seems like even tho Shu lost his memory, he hasn\'t lost his ability to be really really late. LoL. Eek! I can\'t wait for the next chapter!
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more! i demand more! please... please give me more... not that i would fall into begging or anything... but yes... more!
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy cow! That was hot! O_O You did an excellent job, drawing out the teasing, moving smoothly into the sex, and building the climax into everything it\'s suppose to be. I applaude you!
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay...i started reading this story tonight (i love it so much!!!!!) and i just got through with chapter 9 (yes...i have that much time on my hands) newho...i was reading it and when jim started talking about di. i was like o.o FAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!
heh...i\'ll shut up now, but first this story rocks. *nod*
~bobii
heh...i\'ll shut up now, but first this story rocks. *nod*
~bobii