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Okay. That was very depressing. I knew once they found Shuichi he wouldn\'t remember them, but...Oh well. I hope it all works out.

I like this story :-) Good description and angst.. my only problem with it is.. well, how do I put this? Shuichi\'s an artist, a singer - famous only in Japan or not, the Japanese media would probably go into a frenzy about an up and rising NG singer going down in a plane crash. Not to mention, a crash with unknown and suspicious reasons... I think too that, given his status, a lot could have been done to find him as soon as possible. The government\'s response to the plane crash victims may be.. uh.. bad, but still! Tohma could have done a lot more than go in stealthily... and do everything manually. Practically the whole of Japan knows Eiri Yuki in the Gravi-universe, and even more knows about their high-profile relationship... so.. I know it may sound cliche to introduce people who, wow, know about the J-pop going-ons and are fans of yaoi or crap like that but I was just really.. bugged by that tiny little detail.

Moving on, I really think your portrayal of Tohma is just downright loveable...err, I just love how you... make him.. him :D The OC was fun! The fact that it seems like you\'ve really... researched on the stuff you\'ve written just... waah! My vocabulary is really bad so... finding the right words to describe my thoughts is... tough but I hope you get the picture :-)! I\'m interested with Annette, for some reason, I have a soft spot for plotdevice!Mary Sues..... (don\'t take the label in the bad way, I\'ve come to affectionately call all OCs as Mary Sues and Gary Stus :-))

Damn it!! Don\'t play with us like this!! This is really good, but Shu and Yuki better have a happy ending with eachother or this will just break me. Ughh! This is torture!!

-_- I\'ve got tears in my eyes! That was so sad! ARGH! Suddenly one chapter a day isn\'t fast enough!!

No!!!!!! You can\'t do this to Yuki. My heart is breaking right along with his. I thought I was sad when Yuki thought that Shuichi had died, but now I\'m depressed. Please let there be a way for those two to get back together.Please let there be a happy ending for the two. And please update soon. I know that\'s a lot of \"please\'s\" but I really love this story.

hi. um the twists and turns in this story have kept me chained with curiosity. pls...just make sure that it ends well for the main characters!!!

Hmm...it felt like Fake sort of overtook Gravi in this chapter. Not that I\'m complaining (seeing as how I\'m a big fan of both), I\'m jest pointing it out is all.

This story is awesome. I\'m really enjoying reading it, and I\'m looking forward to the next chapter. Poor Yuki! Poor Shu, I wonder what\'s happened to him? One thing, for future reference, an embassy is only in the capitol of a specific country. In major cities, other countries keep consulates, so it would be the Japanese Consulate that Yuki and Tohma go for information because the Japanese Embassy is in Washinton D.C. You\'re a great writer, and this is one of the best gravi fics I\'ve ever run into. Please keep updating!

(recalls a quote from the Petshop of Horrors series) \"All Asians know kung fu.\" That little line was running through my head the second Yuki and Tohma sensed danger. So needless to say, I wasn\'t too worried about them. Although, Yuki picking up the gun and ready to murder the thugs was a bit of a suprise at first. I wasn\'t expecting that.

GAH!!!! I\'m so sorry for such a late review when you already updated three new chapters T__T Sorry! School I would rather sit at home reading fanfictions all day then go to school >.> Anyway O.o;; I\'ve never read Fake before, but doesn\'t matter this fic rocks either way.... still no trace of Shuichi huh? I feel really bad for Yuki, they\'ve like done all that uber hard serching... OH! The fight scene in this last chapter was awesome-ness! ^__^ Who knew Tohma had it in him! Also, I was uber happy a few chapters back you had Tohma showed his perspective of what he thought of Shuichi, I dunno I just thought hearing Tohma say he actually didn\'t hate Shuichi makes me think that\'s awesome. >.> I\'m such a freak. Anywho I\'ll try to keep up with the updates as good as I can with school this week ^^ I\'ll stop ranting anyway! All these last few chapters were great! Please update soon! Can\'t wait!!

-Ukera