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for The Key to My Heart

by JadeHeart

person Reyn
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LoL. \"How do you say \'let\'s fuck\' in Japanese?\" That would be something Dee would say. Once again you\'ve done a great job. Tohma\'s dry wit had me laughing, and the entire time they were discussing Shu\'s incompetant language skills I had this one scene from the manga running through my head of the time Shu got kidnapped to New York and K went to rescue him and while fighting with Rage he gave Shu a twenty and said to go hail a cab and get out of here, and Shu didn\'t know how to hail a cab so he jumped out in the middle of the street to get hit by a cab and began blabbing on about how scared he was and how he needed to get out of here and the poor cab driver was absolutely terrified of this crazy asian speaking kid....oh man, that had me laughing.
person Reyn
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KYA! You\'ve read FAKE!!! I knew it!! As soon as I saw \'Di\' I was like \'THAT\'S DIANA!!!\' (cheers)

Right, so now that I\'ve got that out of my system, I\'m off to read ch. 10...
person Reyn
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, that Ghostbusters line was awesome. But what really got me laughing was Yuki\'s reaction to Dee and Ryo. That was too farking hilarious. I\'m assuming we\'ll eventually be bumping into Bikky as well since dinner will be taking place at Ryo\'s place.

I wonder how Shuichi is doing on his own in New York...last I remember, his English was pretty much nonexsistant...maybe they should search for him in China Town
person kagomegirl
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh wow i started reading this on ffnet and i find it updated here Yay!! please update soon. i wanna see shuichi reunited with yuki soon ^__^
person Ultimecia029
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I go away for two days and all hell breaks loose. Shuichi dies, then he doesn\'t. They find him,but he\'s gone. They track him down but he\'s not there. I\'m loving this story!! And now the boys from FAKE are here. You\'ve made my day!! I hope Shuichi is okay and they find him soon. I can\'t wait to see what happens next. Please update soon.
person annie
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, this is my new favorite story. thanks for keeping it coming!! Shu and Yuki are my favs and this is just heart wrenching, I love it!
person wolf_demon
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
In most places I do not do reviews but in this case I am making a rare review. I just read your story and I gotta tell you, you did a great job. I like I put in my favorites folder. Keep updating.
person annie
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A little FAKE thrown in, I love it!!
person Ukera
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O!!! WOW! It keeps getting better and better and better!!!! A newbie at Fanfiction??!?! I would have never guessed seriously! This is truly one of the best pieces of fanfcition I have ever read! It has a plot!!! ^__^ Heh, your Jim OC character is like...awesome-ness! I also think now wuld be a good time to mention.... I hve NEVER seen anyone able to portray each character\'s emotions so perfectly! Right on the button! No OOC-ness which is like...wow! O.O!! Anyway... I hope they find Shuichi!!!!!! O.o; I\'ve like said that every review, but this is your fic and I have no right to point you toward the way you wnat it to go. The ony thing I wonder...even if they do find Shuichi, are they sure Shu will remember anything about Yuki and them >.> The suspense yet again! Litterally can not wait for the next chapter as usual!! And sorry this rant was a little bit longe then usual >.>

-Ukera
person Reyn
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. You weren\'t kidding when you said it was short. (pouts) I think that because it\'s so short, you should post two chapters in one day jest to make up for it! ^.^

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