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for The Key to My Heart

by JadeHeart

person Reyn
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I KNEW Shuichi wasn\'t dead! I knew it! Actually, I figured the man wasn\'t Shu to begin with. LoL. I did find it somewhat entertaining at how much...lesser Shuichi\'s injuries were compared to everyone elses. That kid is like a cockaroach. Well, I hope Yuki catches up to him really soon! At least we now know he\'s alive ^_^
person monica
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DONT LEAVE ME HANGING!..
person monica
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, you made me cry.
person Ukera
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O!!! YESSS!!! There\'s still hope!!!!! Please let one of those two in the other hospital be Shuichi!!! I have faith in you!!! ^^;; This is a really unique plot and it just has me attached and leaves me at suspense and wanting more!! *still has box of tissues just in case* As stupid as this makes me sound, I just figured out that when Yuki had told Tohma to wait when he parked in front of that shopping mall (chapter 2 I think...)right before they left for America that he *I think* went in to buy that necklace that had the key to my heart theme thing he saw ealier when he was there.... that\'s a guess.... and if it was that obvious then T___T I\'m stupid. Anyway you ttally rock my socks! Can\'t wait to the next chapter and sorry for ranting my outh off...

-Ukera
person Ukera
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! *cries* He\'s still alive!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!!! *uses tissues for happiness* amnesia huh? That sucks!!!! T___T Thank you for the UBER quick update!!!! I have fallen EVEN MORE in love woth this fic! I a so happy you didn\'t just end it at chapter one! This has got to be the best gravi fic I have ever read, no lie! I can\'t wait any longer O.O The suspence!!! Please let the find Shu and hope he regains his memory T___T *prepares YET ANOTHER box of tissues* ^^;; I cry at almost any thing... Sorry I ranted!!! >.< Please Update soon though! I love this!!!! Also glad I can encourage people, no one ever says I encourge them, most say it\'s the opposite T___T anyway.... I envy you and you\'re writing skills!

-Ukera
person Ukera
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes that was short. T__T But an update is an update and I sure love this fic! Heh, can\'t wait to see where you\'re going with this!!!! *still voting for happy ending* ^^;; Anyway, again I can not wait until the next chapter *has a box of tissues just in case* ^^- Freat job though!

-Ukera
person Reyn
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you\'re really enjoying stringing your readers out, aren\'t you? Oh well, I don\'t mind that much considering you update every day ^_^
person Ukera
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Cries* This is such a tear jerker!! I must say I am very moved by this piece of fanfiction. And this isn\'t the ending huh? *......sniff....tear... sob* *Starts to cry again* Shuichi!!! Noooooo! Please some how let him magically live so him and Yuki can be happy! T__T No matter how corny that sounds.... Sooooo much sadness But either way... This has got to be one of the best fanfictions I have ever read!!!! So great!!! Can\'t wait until the next chapter!!! Thanks!

-Ukera
person Ultimecia029
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really loving this story, although I must admit I\'m on edge waiting to see if they find Shuichi. It\'s also good to see Tohma being helpful and not being the creepy bastard he usually is.Will you reveal the relationship between Jim and Tohma, I wonder? I can\'t wait for the next chapter to be posted.
person chocho
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, that was one of the most depressing and saddest things I have ever read in my entire life. You did a good job bringing out the emotion of the moment that\'s for sure, even if it was sad. Can\'t wait to find out what happens.

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