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for The Key to My Heart

by JadeHeart

person red-rose-priestess
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am spechless. This was THE BEST fan fic, I have EVER read. I am not joking. I cannot get over it. It was wonderful, and I want to print the whole thing out, though I might be out of ink if I did that. Please please write a sequel. Even if it's just a one shot. I would love to read it.
person Blue
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would like to let you know that throughout all those months without an update and the messed up way the website was functioning i didn't lose hope i knew i would be able to finish reading this story i just had it engraved in my mind. The story was exquisite, and it's not the opinion of someone without any kind of experience, i'm quite the avid reader and i can say this work could very well pass as bestseller. Completely enchanting and the character development was well timed and throughly describe. Honestly you have my utmost respect as a writter.
person Vanessa
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The whole story kept me on the edge of my seat. The ending was a little corny, but it worked. I was starting to think that the pendant was going to be forgotten, but i was proven wrong. It was very well-written. I loved every minute of it. I was addicted from the very beginning.

Thank you so much for a wonderful tale.

~V
person fuzzybunnytoo
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was lucky for as AFF was down I got to read this on the Grav site and I loved it. It kept me in great angsty land for a long time. I ran accross it here and just had to read the last chapter again. I love this story. You are wonderful and gave me many tear stained pillows. Thanks
person Chikky
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes I found you again... Nicely written ending. I want a write up. Like a sequel or something... it's so good! Please? Even if it's a chapter long XDD Email me sometime~!
person Reyn
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I tried leaving a really long review last time on gur.net, but then my comp decided that I had enough of the internet and I lost everything when I clicked the 'submit' button. (decides to try this again)

This story was beautiful. So beautiful, that it deserves an epilogue. I nice long, smutty, lovey-dovey epilogue (hint hint)

I really did enjoy this story from chapter 1 all the way to the end. I loved how you slipped in some of the anime's style to keep it true to it's roots. I loved the emotions you put me through. I loved the slight crossover with FAKE. I loved that you were able to get Ryuichi dead on. I love that you didn't rush the story and didn't rush to get Shuichi and Yuki back together. There was a bunch of other stuff I loved as well, but now I can't remember it. You really did do a great job with this story. I'm glad I was able to follow it right from the first chapter. And I'll be more than happy to follow it right through the long, smutty, lovey-dovey epilogue as well (nudge nudge, hint hint).
person Tirnnanog-Pigtails
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for this story- I have to admit that I've been lurking since chapter 10 or so, and have loved so much of this story. Admittedly I was hoping for a nice steamy lemon at the end, but since it was cute with the shouting match, I'm satisfied (sorry, bad pun...) The story did get a little dull and frustrating while it was in Qubec, but that actually suited Yuki's mood at the time, so it fit the story. I'm glad you finished- when aff went down I was afraid I'd be left waiting on it forever. Thank you for a wonderful story!
person *silvertail*
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love absoultely love ur story u should update more i wanna know if shu-chan remembers yuki-chan
person blue
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey umm you won\'t update anymore or what? i really like this story but with all the messing around they have done with the website it seems everyone froze on one spot will you update?
person Kelly
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It feels like I'm actually reading a novel because of its length; this is awesome! I really wish Yuki would hurry up and tell Shuichi the truth. Though I have to admit I like how you seem to carry out the plot really far, it keeps me wanting more. When this fic is complete, I will feel satisfied, as well as a little saddened. This story is just so heartwrenching. I can really feel for Yuki, though I, have never personally experienced anything of the sort. I can just imagine what it would be like to spend so much time, and work so hard to find the person you are so much in love with, but to only find a person who no longer even remembers your name. This is one of the few fics I've ever read that has actually made me cry (on more than one occasion too!). I am dying to read the next chapter. Stay inspired! :)

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