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Ya know, it occured to me that you didn't mention them coming across pictures of Yuki's and Shuichi's supposed honeymoon...especially since that's the biggest news at the moment...oh! And I finally finished that oneshot! It's jest getting beta'd at the moment ^_^

Well written chapter as always, I just wish things would move a bit faster. Your story always makes me so sad for Yuki. I know that Annette is nice enough, and it seemed like you were trying to build a little sympathy for her in this chapter but I can't help it. I want her gone, GONE GONE GONE!!!! I want Yuki and Shuichi back together. I'm hoping that's what your leading towards cause if this story ends with Shuichi and Annette together I will cry, long and hard (and I don't usually cry). Are you planning for the story to go on much longer or can we look forward to Yuki and Shuichi getting back together soon? Anyways good new chapter, update soon, and please please make Annette go far far far far far faaaaaar FAAAAAAAR away.:D Thank you

And I have to agree with KaySan666, it's really not fair to start a relationship with someone who has no memory of their life. It's not fair to Shuichi or to anyone he might have waiting for him. And only now, when she feels like she might lose out, is she even thinking about the fact that he might have someone else. And even then she's thinking about it from her selfish POV. "What if he’s got another girlfriend back in Japan waiting for him? Where would that leave her?" She's not thinking about the fact that this person could have been with Shuichi for years and spent months agonizing over whether or not he was alive and where he was, if he was hurt, etc (which all applies to Yuki). She's just worried about herself. Wow now KaySan's comment has really made me hate Annette. Get rid of her, the evil Bitch:D

Thank-you for the new chapter..I love reading this story but I really hope shuichi gets more of his memory back breaks my heart to see Eiri in such pain.....He should have told him the truth...hope to read more soon...

wow...well not really wow. just...interesting. they're so close but so far. and poor yuki! i keep waiting for him to loose control and tell shuuichi or for shuuichi to have a flashback about their relationship. but you keep swinging them back from it! its so frustrating but wonderfully so. keep up the work!

AGGH! WHEN WILL HE REMEMBER! Holy poop. The angst is sooo good. I love Vulnerable!Yuki. It's great. How much longer till Shu remembers? I don't think poor Yuki (or I ^_^;) can take much more!

I realy love this story. my heart it always beating madly when im reading this story.
BUT
I wouldnt have said it like A.S. but its the truth... the story is dragging. After i read that his family and his friend are coming over i thought that one of them would give away the truth, not on purpose but it would slip. I thought maybe Ryuichi would tell him in his crazy-like-a-nut way that Shu is the lover of Eiri.

I realy like how you focus on the emotions of the characters but sometimes its just too much. I know that Anette is afraid to loose Shu but did she realy think she could keep him forever? he has Amnesia for gods sake, sooner or later his memorie would have returned. I dont know the right word.. but i dont think its ... fair... to start a relationship with someone who lost his memorie. Shu only knows Anette and trusts her BECAUSE she is the only thing he knows...(does that make sense???) She started a new life with him regardless of him leaving his other life behind.

PLEASE dont make the story toooooooo long. Cant wait for the next chapter!

"She was attracted to him, but it felt a little too much like the attraction a moth had to the flame. It was very, very beautiful….and completely suicidal."

Best. Description. Of. Eiri. Yuki. Ever. ^_^

Anyway, I think this situation needs some Ryuichi Sakuma intervention. Only Ryu could possibly untangle this mess, and by "untangle," I of course mean, "inadvertantly-spill-the-beans-and-create-total-uproar-in-a-really-messy-way."

I eagerly anticipate the next chapter.

This story is dragging horribly. The longer this lie goes on the less I want to read the fic. Having Shuichi's family and friends come over and flat-out lie to him is absurd, and getting him his own apartment to fuel the deception is even more stupid. I'm trying to say onaboard with this story, but I don't know how much longer I can hold on waiting for something to happen. It's getting really boring...

Very Good, as always. This is killing me, its so horribly sad. You just cry for Yuki, Shuichi just has to remember him! And soon. Although I have to probably agree with a few people, Im not much of an Annette Fan. She'd probably be fine if she wasnt going out with Shuichi. And poor Yuki, I would have died if I had to sit with both of them through their public displays right in front of him. I really want to see how this will turn out, and soon!