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for The Key to My Heart

by JadeHeart

schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like. I like! Please update soon, pretty please. I really like these Shuichi gets an amnesia and Yuki is all crazy to get him back stuff. The desperation and logining is just heart aching. And I'm longing for an update. Goodluck! <3
person RyuichiSakuma2
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOU. I LOVE THE STORY.
Let's party! ~Oooh how I hate that little bitch, Annette! Steeling Shuichi away from poor Yuki. -tear-
Oh so angsty~

-Ryu
person Citizen Cobalt
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What the hell happens next? This story is depressing me so much! I nearly cried! But I must keep reading! Annette must die! Poor Yuki! ARRRGGGGHHHH! Please update! Annette must die! A horrible, painful, bloody death! Yes, definitely. And Yuki and Shuichi will get back together. Oh, I'm so distraught now. Please update!
person Ultimecia029
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As usual another brilliant chapter!!! I swear your writings have become my new anti drug. I cannot say how much I love this story (although I keep trying!) But one thought kept popping into my head while reading about Yuki and Shuichi's views on telling the truth: Sometimes truth is stranger than fiction. I await Annette's reaction when (and if) she hears the real story behind Yuki and Shuichi's true relationship. I'm sorry she's a nice character,but she's a hinderance to Shuichi and Yuki getting back together.I wonder if he'll throw something at her during their meeting?? THAT would prove to be interesting.......
person Reyn
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
y'know, at this rate Yuki's gonna be coughing up blood again and it'll be all Shuichi's fault and if Shuichi doesn't get his memories back while Yuki is slowly dying in the hospital, I'm gonna cast my vote for thwaking him upside the head to make him remember!!
person the soul
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter please keep going....
person chocho
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, I've got to be honest. I'm starting to agree with Eiri. I am getting a little sick of Annette myself. I don't know why, truthfully. She seems like a very nice girl, but still....
And I also agree with Eiri on another issue. He really is a moron! And he calls Shuichi the idiot? Ya know, if he doesn't say something to Shuichi soon, someone else will. I mean, come on! Mrs. Shindou has just a big a mouth as her son. I don't know about you, but hereing something from someone else rather then straight from the horses mouth just makes things ten times worse. Anyway, can't wait to read the next chapter.
person Bookworm51485
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAA!!!! This is so frustrating. Annette seems like a nice enough person but I want her gone. Gone far far far away. I can understand why Yuki would lie, it might be different if one of them was a woman but their not. Shuichi, being with Annette, probably thinks he's straight. I remember from the series he had a few problems in the beginning of their relationship (though he got over it fairly quickly) so Yuki probably wouldn't want to spring it on him that not only was he with someone (so he's sort of a two-timer) but he was also in a relationship with a man. Though I hope that his family or somebody comes and tells Shuichi or he remembers soon. This story makes me sad and I want them back together. But thank you for updating so quickly, if you didn't it would drive me nuts waiting to find out what happens. But I still want Annette gone, far far away. I don't even want them to stay friends, I just want her gone. I think I'm with Yuki on this one:) Anyways update soon, I love your story.
person Danielle
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwmygod. -screeches in agony-

How much torture does Yuki-san have to go through in one looong, painful, sit-in? It's terrible!! I'm writhing with anticipation... I had doubted a great deal that you'd update again in the time I'd read it till now, but you HAD! And...man. Yuki is in for a scare of his life. Maybe the secret of unlocking Shuichi's amnesia is Yuki kissing him! That would be romantic, and perfect! Man, I hope that's what your planning - but if it is, don't tell me I want to guess!! =) I love this story, please don't kill Yuki with so much jealousy. I feel empathy towards Yuki (him being my favourite character) and I feel all of the horrible feelings that he is when he hears about Annette or thinks about how Shu doesn't know...

;-;
person Brittany
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story! Im so terribly upset though, Poor Yuki! Shuuichi has to hurry and remember poor Yuki! And quick! No Annette!

Poor Yuki!

Great story, I cant wait for more!

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