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for Three Times A Charm

by JadeHeart

person sumblink2
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG *tears in my eyes* that was soo sad and yet romantic, its funny how they cross. God that was beautiful. I want to cry for Dee and Ryo, OMG will they ever get back together, and fix things up. I'm going to cry again. UPDATE SOON!!!!! I just can't believe that Dee left Ryo just like that, to think, damn, I am amazed. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. This is such a good read. I love it.
person Lin
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading this ff for a long time but I haven't gotten enough energy/time (read:I was lazy) to write a review... *ashamed* I just wanted to say that this fic of yours is fabulous. I love it. And I check every day that is there a new chapter. Yes, I am obsessed but... I love the way how you describe Ryo's and Dee's feelings. They feel so real. And about the latest thing: Ryo denying Dee is so so touching. I can feel Dee's agony and I just wish that Ryo will come terms with himself and accepts Dee. Because Dee loves him very much and together they can handle everything. ^^ So, please update soon!!
person Zierra
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, now we're talking... *evil grin* Me likes more than I dare admit. =o) You'll definitely have me sticking around until the end. Promise!

Hugs, Z
person Anon
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I guess things are over between Dee and Ryo now that this has happened. If Ryo, would only talk to Bikky and his family before saying the things he did. I know, he probably didn't mean for them to said that way, but they hurt Dee deeply nonetheless. Its clear, Dee needs to stay away from Ryo until Ryo decides to be honest with his family as well as himself or things will only continue to get worse. Awaiting the next chapter!!
person Mihoshi
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! *sniff, sniff*
That was the most hart-wrenching thing I've ever read.
I had no idea Dee could be so deep in his feelings and emotions.
And at the end when the two lock eyes with each other, it was so beautiful *wipes away tear*.
Go get him, Dee! Go get him Ryo!
person Himeko
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading FAKE recently, and I fell in love with it IMMEDIATLY!!! "Threes a Charm" is the best fanfic I've read out of the whole FAKE fic section! Please have a new chapter up soon!! =>
person Cidsa
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Quite unlike the happy ending painted by the manga (and the special comic printed afterwards, with Ryo moving in with Dee).
This is really well written and interesting, but soooo frustrating. Rawr, I want to just kick Ryo's ass XD
Awesome job, I'm going to be watching for new chapters :D
person JarredGoddess
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story so far. The characters respond in a very realistic and charateristic fashion; the plot is well-concieved, and it's takes things beyond 'happily ever after'. It makes the story more real to know that there are quite a few bumps on the road to happiness.
Oh Ryo...you're making it so much harder than it has to be; Bikky's probably going to be more upset with you when Dee does something dramatic like dating JJ or switching partners...Anyhow, I'm really interested in seeing more (hint, hint, hint). I've really grown to love the frequent updates...
person Sandra
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ouch, this was hurtful!
Although I can sympathize with Ryo's dilemma, I also understand how painful it is for Dee.
Ryo's reticence about telling other people of their relationship is understandable, especially when it's with another man. This situation about Bicky really bothers me, I know the kid doesn't love Dee to death, but I really don't believe he hates him. Of course it will be difficult for him to accept their relationship, but Ryo can't use him as a shield for his own insecurities and fears!
I'm not saying this is gonna be easy and simple. It's complicated! But very interesting and worth writing about!
I hope you can be satisfied with the path you choose for them, that's the most important thing - the author enjoying his work.
And also hope this beautiful couple can find each other and how to live with their love! BEcause this is LOVE!!!

Thanks for sharing,
Hugs

person bishigurl345
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the best chapter !! You made very itelligent obstacles for Dee and Ryo to over come, and it gives their relationship a very realistic quality. I hope they booth come to a consenus and understanding with each other. Wonderful chapter, and wonderful story please update soon! I hope Dee and Ryo will kiss and make up...and then make out and something more ;)

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