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for Three Times A Charm

by JadeHeart

person Ashcat
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chpt 29: Oh yay finally Bikky tries to slap some sense in our two confused boys :D I'm so glad someone hit Dee for being stupid and now Dee can hit (kiss?) Ryo into not being so stupid himself and we can get them going back on the right track :D What a lovely new years present thank you :D
person horizon
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i've already reviewed this story before.. but it's good enough that it deserves another review! i am addicted to this plotline, and i think your writing style is incredible. everything about this story is perfect! i'm a huge fan of yours, i can't wait to read the next chapters. i'm also curious about why it's called "three times a charm" but it's probably obvious, and i just can't figure it out. you're amazing, you deserve so much praise and admiration, it isn't even funny. have a happy new year! :)
person Tlynn
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweetie - can you please get these two back together now! Now that Bikky and Carol are involved! The Angst is killing me! I used to be so happy when this would pop up on the "Latest" list now I almost dread it when I see it, I know you will make me cry and still not give me any gooshy man sex. Don't get me wrong, your writing remains high quality and your characterization is good if a little extreme. Butg if one more thing goes wrong for these two it could get too - schlock-y if you know what I mean. Even though I have been following this for over a year now, I might just give up if there isn't a happy ending! Where is the "third time"? Where is "the charm?"

Please!?! Pretty Please!?! Give us a supersweet and totally sweaty happy ending! Please! With sugar and Yoai on top.

Trisha

A fan of yours on many fandoms.
person Blue-eyes-green
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is often my reaction to angst, despite my deep love of your stories, but these two have it so hard for each other it's pathetic. But I guess I can tell where Ryo's coming from- don't drop a bomb on poor Dee until he's well, stupid as it may be, And Dee is mentally and physically exhausted from his illness and three years of diasappointed chasing, so it figures he's waiting for a cue from Ryo before he wears his heart on his sleeve... but I'm completely hoping that either they wind up in an all revealing fight on the car ride home, or someone gives one or the other a clue about true feelings.... Thank you for another lovely chapter. it was beautifully written, and makes me desperately want to know what happens next. Thank you and happy winter celebration of your choice!
person Miztikal-Dragon(not signed in)
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh wow.. I missed out on a lot while I was away (went on vacation to washington without the family) This story is so awesome! Kyaaah so much missunderstanding! I cry, mucho mucho! Please keep up the great work and update asap! I was waiting forever for a new chapter and I'm stoked... Hopefully there will be lots of sexual humor! i feel bad for Ryo and Dee, but I love the way you tell the story. I love it mucho mucho times four! lol -Krystal-
person horizon
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thank you for updating on christmas :D it made my day a whole lot better, and I have been anticipating this for a long time. This story is amazing, I'll be eagerly awaiting an update. Both Dee and Ryo are very in-character throughout this fic, and it may just be my favourite FAKE fic. you should be proud of your work!
person tanaquil
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just recently discovered this story -- it's so great to read a FAKE story where the characters are really in-character! I hope it's winding up to a climax very soon!
person catti-dono
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh sure!!!....lets just be so f@#ing cruel, not just this story but with The Whisper at my side as well...Geeze how cruel to leave us hanging on not just one story but TWO....you are a cruel, cruel person and knowing you it will be like a month before you update, leaving us hanging again in anticipation of two fabulous stories...love this story...but then I love all of your stories....cannot wait for an update on all that are waiting updates...hopefully sooner and not later...catti
person Ashcat
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, you know I resisted reading this since I don't like Fake, but I'm so glad I started! I really am enjoying the story but damn I'm now being tortured with two of your stories O.O and we don't even know what happened with Ryo but I think he probablly did kill the guy but we'll see I hope not but then you're not the angst queen for nothing ;) *hugs* thanks for giving us even more wonderful stories :)
person Miztikal-Dragon(not signed in)
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
eeeep! kyahh you're so mean to me! lol i love this story tooO! please keep up the great work and update asap. I hope that we can see some JJXDrake goodness also! w00t! lol -Krystal-

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