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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My heart is all clenched! God, they've gone so far, and it may all just end right here. See, this is what happens when you keep banking on tommarrow!
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow! u've added a lot to this!!
& such a sudden turn it's recently taken!!
i struggled sooo much btwn sadness & anger at Dee's shooting. i'm still hoping- can't wait to find out that Ryo's doing all this in vain & Dee will be astonished at the length's he's gone to out of grief & pain.
it's always the quiet, steady ones that get the scariest. ^_~
hope u post more soon! ^_^
& such a sudden turn it's recently taken!!
i struggled sooo much btwn sadness & anger at Dee's shooting. i'm still hoping- can't wait to find out that Ryo's doing all this in vain & Dee will be astonished at the length's he's gone to out of grief & pain.
it's always the quiet, steady ones that get the scariest. ^_~
hope u post more soon! ^_^
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAKKKKKK! don't leave it there!!!!!! oh please please update soon! Poor Ryo isnt going to kill anyone is he? he could find out in time *hopeful* and Dee cant be dead- he's DEE! Dee just doesnt die *lol* He's immortal! This is awesome, i'm so glad you gave it a plot, focussing more on the plot than the smut- there really isnt enough good plot-driven stories out there. The boys reactions are just absolutely heartbreaking. Great use of words, and none of those obvious spelling or grammar mistakes that are so annoying in some fanfictions. I look forward to reading the rest of this- please dont make me wait too long!
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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice job
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DEE CAN'T BE DEAD!!! MAKE HIM WAKE UP!!! PLEASE LET THEM BE TOGETHER!!!
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July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don´t like the way this is going... I don´t want Ryo to do something extremely stupid! I´m eagerly waiting for the next update!
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July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh no is Dee really dead? I don't think I could finish reading this if he was!
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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
He's not really dead, right? I mean...He washed up somewhere and he's alive right? No officer goes in without a vest on and he washed up somewhere...right?
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June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was GREAT!!! Uhm... I am a little worried about Ryo though... It looks like he's about to go "postal" as the saying goes on somebody. I just hope it isn't a bunch of somewhat innocent people. I mean I hope it's the guys actually responsible for what happened to Dee and not like going after the precinct guys responsible for Dee leaving or something like that.
Cold Ryo oh boy. Cannot be a good thing.
Please update soon I want to know what happens! We're not turning Ryo into some sort of mass murderer right?
Cause I can't see a good ending to that scenario
Galacia
Cold Ryo oh boy. Cannot be a good thing.
Please update soon I want to know what happens! We're not turning Ryo into some sort of mass murderer right?
Cause I can't see a good ending to that scenario
Galacia
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June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I started reading this what feels like ages ago!
It's so good. You can literally FEEL the emotions coming off the screen.
It's made me choked up, hold my breath in anticipation and feel like wailing "nooooo"!!
Can barely wait for the next update!!
It's so good. You can literally FEEL the emotions coming off the screen.
It's made me choked up, hold my breath in anticipation and feel like wailing "nooooo"!!
Can barely wait for the next update!!