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for Three Times A Charm

by JadeHeart

person QueenB
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 15 *WHUMP* Excuse me, that was the sound of me falling on the floor. I'm okay now.

Gee, I hope Bikky wasn't there to hear all that. Makes me wonder why Ryo was so worried about Dee staying over if he's making that much noise by himself.
person Himeko
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww.....Ryo! Please keep writing! Your new chapter was awesome!
person bishigurl345
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. that was hot. Considering who was the focus of Ryo's Solo act, I am surprised that he has held out this long. I love the time you are taking in exploring their realtuionship. I am glad it s long becasue it gives tiem fore the characters to develop. I loved the little grape attack in the begining :) it was beyond sweet. I hope Dee hasn't done anything that will jeporadize him nad Ryo gettingback together, I donr' want the fact ath Dee may be seeing some girls to cause a misunderstanding between him and Ryo, thus making them spend more time apart.
Hopefuly Ryo will be ready to start his and Dee/s relaitonship up for real soon. Its a very good stoy and a look foreward to reading more from you.

Oh and in regards to Ryo's performance...I hope that Bikky wasn't home, and if he was I hope the apartment's walls are thick ;)
person MeLaiya
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh man, can you say *hot*
person Lin
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I.NEED.THE.NEXT.CHAPTER!!!!! NOW.PLEASE! ^^ Dee seeing women from work? Oh my, oh my... This is not looking good... And I think Dee should tell to Ryo what he trully feels and thinks. And the same goes for Ryo. Those two are just keep everything for themselves and thus all the problems are jumping out. Alhtough I do understand both of them... What an agony!! *suffering from anciousness and pain while waiting for the new chappie*
person Zierra
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No! Dee did not just call Ryo "buddy" did he?! *gasps* That's like.... completely unromantic! Bad, Dee, bad! But you really opened for a super-mega-great opportunity with Ryo's little doubt there, about Dee meeting someone else. I've got like three plausible outcomes, but I want to know your.... ^_^

Hugs, Z
person sumblink2
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn you!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! I loved it, at first I was wondering why this chapter was about Bikky and then a talk with Jim, and the pricipal, but I get it now, Update soon, I want to know what Dee ment about the spice thing.And, what will happen between Dee and Ryo??? Soo many questions, Need answers!!!!!
person jollyolly
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww..that was so sweet! They both are nervous and blushing around each other...when what they really want is to pounce and ravish each other!^^ Keep writing, pleeze!
person Himeko
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been checking for updates every few hours! I hope Dee and Ryo get back together, and then some lemon again! Wahhhh! Dee come back!
person mauztattoo
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is very sweet! The amount of 'foot in mouth " moments make me think of something my mom used to say - sometimes a man needs a foot inm the ass to jolt his brain into working! Not that Ryo or Dee should smack on each other - its perhaps just the time for Fake's resident ass-kicker, Bikky , to make his ideas known! Please keep going!

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