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for Three Times A Charm

by JadeHeart

person KaraQ
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how much more angst I can take... :-( But I'm so engrossed in the story (cuz it's still really good despite the angst), that I can't help reading it, praying for an happy ending.
I honestly think Ryo is a bit of a shithead (and anti sexual) in this story, and I really hope he'll shape up really soon and realise that it is ok to be in love no matter what others say, especially that brat Bikky. Darn I'm really looking forward to their confrontation. Perhaps Carol will be on Ryo's side...
Please update soon. :-)

~KaraQ
person Little silly me
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH.MY.GOD!!! That's like the coolest story, man!! Seriously, it's great! Pleas keep up the good work! I really, really like the cool Dee and I'm glad he isn't such a softy to just forgive Ryo! You know what? It would be AWSOME with some soft and sexy phone-chat!^-^of cours it's up to you, but it would be awsome! Still it's so cool!!
person Lin
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Three words: I LOVE THIS!!! It is so fabulous story and written so well!! Please continue!! Poor Ryo... it is hard for him when Dee left so suddenly. But I do understand why Dee did that. I just hope he didn't need to do it... Ryo must open his eyes and realize what is most important in his life. Of course that is easier to say that done... Please, update soon!!

Lin
person Anon
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, its the first step in the right direction. Maybe by the time Dee returns, Ryo and Dee will be able to say what they want to say. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
person Himeko
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter...ANOTHER MASTERPIECE!!! I love it! You should bring a conversationbetween Ryo and Bikky, and Bikky goes "Whatever makes you happy..." I thinkn something like that will be so heart-warming. DEE! COME BACK!!!!!!!!!!!
person Tashie-chan
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* Awww, it\'s so sad. Make them get everything sorted out and then have lots of sweaty man sex. ^_^
Good job though, I love this fic. Keep updating this fast, it\'s great having a new chapter every day! <3
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really awesome and very tragic.
person Mihoshi
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
That is the sweetest thing I've ever read *sniff, sniff*
The language of flowers is a wonderous thing. I wish a guy could do that for me.
OOHHHHHHHHHHH! I hope those two get back together soon, the suspense is killing me!!!!! :D
Keep writing please!!!! *SQUEAL LOUDLY*
person Zierra
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw, damn! *sobs* First you had me grinning cruelly, then you had me sobbing uncontrolably. I'm so torn I don't know where to sit! Get back together, don't get back together. But he had to send him that rose! Damn! I'm a total sucker for roses... Truth to be told I'm a sucker for a lot of things, but roses, unrequited love and jealousy for this fic anyway! As long as the last two never happens to me again, that is... Ah, over-sharing, have to stop with that!!!
Love this story, love it, love it!

Hugs, Z
person Himeko
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12 was so sweet. I loved the ending. I seriously was getting teary in the eye! Keep on writing!

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