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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're absolutely EVIL.
"They woke up the next morning. Nah, just kidding."
That made me mad XD
It was a good story, not exactly sexy, but highly amusing. Less mentions of your own thoughts would help it flow a little more smoothly, and a little bit more detail (or more foreplay) would make it better.
"They woke up the next morning. Nah, just kidding."
That made me mad XD
It was a good story, not exactly sexy, but highly amusing. Less mentions of your own thoughts would help it flow a little more smoothly, and a little bit more detail (or more foreplay) would make it better.
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XD <3
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was adorable. i loved it. and shigure, at the end... it fit.
tankee!!
tankee!!
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this hahaaha 2 much sugar
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the first Yuki/Kyou story I've read that, to put it nicely, doesn't suck balls. The writing was smooth and flawless, with a lovely song choice (it took me a while to remember that I'd heard it before). And I love the little trick you played on us. ^_^
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you almost got me. i really thought that you would skip the fun part bad bad you shouldent tease