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for Obsession Meets Reality

by MayhemsAngel

person Anon
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um... okay, I like the concept behind the story. it's very interesting. I liked the randomness of their meeting but felt the relationship was rushed. If you could maybe write in a few more encounters before they fall into bed and declare their undying love and devotion to each other it might flow a little better. And not to say that guys don't say 'I love you', but they toss that around very casually. It's not a bad story, really, so please don't take this the wrong way. I do hope to see more work from you.

Other than that... you realize that spaghetti is Italian food and not American right?
person Kurosaki Towa
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was so cute! I\'m actually crying! Keep going!
person Shikigami no Touda-kun
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was cute! Oh ya! Watashi wa Touda desu. Call me Tou or Touda or just Shikigami no Touda. But I\'m Touda-kun. Anyway I loved this story! You have to keep going! More! More! More! You guys rock! Ryu & Tats are so cute! Love ya gotta go! See ya next chappie.
person jarm
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God I love this fic.
person me
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you NEED to up date soon
person Travellyr
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ hee! This is cute. I\'m going to enjoy seeing what it turns into. *snicker* I love Tatsuha. He\'s such a teenager.
person me
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i absolutley cant wait for the next chapter also i cant help buthope that in a future chapter that tats will be on top since in the manga it says first of all that he i verry sexualy active mainly \\w his bros ex\'s and it strongly hints that he would be the dominate one if he were \\w ryu but i must say i realy like ryu on top update soon
person me
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes please add more i love this oh btw isnt ryuichi shorter that tatshua
person Ally-Chan
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woooot! wooooot! I loved that!! hot! and sweeet! and cute!! I love Ryu/Tat!!! ohhh update soooooon!! I absolutely adored it!
person lily
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
moremoremoremoremoremore......PLEASE!!!!!!! ryu and tats all the way...YEAH!! ugh, chocolate, sorry.


ja, lily

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