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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um... okay, I like the concept behind the story. it's very interesting. I liked the randomness of their meeting but felt the relationship was rushed. If you could maybe write in a few more encounters before they fall into bed and declare their undying love and devotion to each other it might flow a little better. And not to say that guys don't say 'I love you', but they toss that around very casually. It's not a bad story, really, so please don't take this the wrong way. I do hope to see more work from you.
Other than that... you realize that spaghetti is Italian food and not American right?
Other than that... you realize that spaghetti is Italian food and not American right?
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was so cute! I\'m actually crying! Keep going!
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was cute! Oh ya! Watashi wa Touda desu. Call me Tou or Touda or just Shikigami no Touda. But I\'m Touda-kun. Anyway I loved this story! You have to keep going! More! More! More! You guys rock! Ryu & Tats are so cute! Love ya gotta go! See ya next chappie.
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God I love this fic.
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you NEED to up date soon
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ hee! This is cute. I\'m going to enjoy seeing what it turns into. *snicker* I love Tatsuha. He\'s such a teenager.
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i absolutley cant wait for the next chapter also i cant help buthope that in a future chapter that tats will be on top since in the manga it says first of all that he i verry sexualy active mainly \\w his bros ex\'s and it strongly hints that he would be the dominate one if he were \\w ryu but i must say i realy like ryu on top update soon
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes please add more i love this oh btw isnt ryuichi shorter that tatshua
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woooot! wooooot! I loved that!! hot! and sweeet! and cute!! I love Ryu/Tat!!! ohhh update soooooon!! I absolutely adored it!
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
moremoremoremoremoremore......PLEASE!!!!!!! ryu and tats all the way...YEAH!! ugh, chocolate, sorry.
ja, lily
ja, lily