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Wow... I haven\'t read an entire fanfiction in so dang long without excessive skimming... and yours... made me read it! O_O I had no choice! I actually enjoyed a fanfic... and a dang long one at that!

And now... I want to reaaaaaad moooooooooooore! XD You have rekindled my faith in fanfics... and now there is no more to read! Argh! *thrashes in agony*

wow....... just wow. *picks her jaw off of the floor* i just read all of this in one sitting, so give me a moment to gather my thoughts here. damn. all i can possibly say at this moment is that this is one of darkest, the most angst filled saiyuki story that i have ever had the pleasure of reading. i mean, wow. this story is out-fucking-rageous. bloody brillant. i cant even comprehend the amount of mental anguish poor goku and sanzo are going though. and with that being said, i anxiously await your next update.

Wow I can\'t believe I just sat here and read your entire story tonight Oo
It was good! Have to admit I\'m an angsty fan, and I know from first hand experience that you are setting yourself up for one hell of a ride. Taking on the emotional levels of characters who were practically destroyed, and trying to recover is NEVER an easy thing. You have to be so delicate, and the world is far from easily forgiving. Events like these can destroy a person entirely, and even in your story almost did. I see you have a firm grasp on how you\'re working your healing processes among them all, so frustrating and awe inspiring at the same time. You have my good vote, this has been a really good story! THank you so much!
-Revvy

(stares,stares,stares,stares) excuse me while i\'ll pick myself off the floor (crawls back up on the chair) Wow, now that\'s good, I love the relationship bewteen Sanzo and Goku, it so...sweet and also so dark, hehehehe, you can\'t never escapse from the darkness of your own heart, aye, tis true, but anyway, i love how you work it into the story, Saiyuki is always my fav. ever since i know the \'true\' legend, i have it all, muhahahahahahaha, the legend i mean, the souce of Saiyuki, of course their personality change, but it all for the good, love it, i can\'t wait for more to come...(glues himself to the screen and reads some more)

I too would like to comment. I really like this--it\'s a unique and highly absorbing read. I especially like the concept of the \"tear of the soul\" and thoroughly enjoyed Sanzo\'s comment that \"we\'re such a sexy bunch of heros\" (paraphrasing badly)--but what a great thing to say (it\'s what we fangirls believe anyway).
I was also completely caught up in Goku\'s transformation in Seitan Taisei and Sanzo\'s wonderful comments on freedom from pain--which is devotely Buddhist to be sure, and closer to his true character than I generally see in fiction for this fandom.
Good job. Hope to see more soon.
Julie

Since this story is fairly new and no one has commented on it yet, and I would like it to continue, I\'m going to review. I think this story is great. You\'ve done a wonderful job. The plot is interesting and heartbreaking, and, despite the lack of reviews, I hope you continue your story. I would like to see how you are going to finish it. If you don\'t intend to finish it here because of the lack of reviews, I would be much appreciated if you just forwarded it to me directly because I would love to see the ending. Great job!!! @`~>~