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Chpt 6: Interesting premise that he is trying to get rid of the baby and himself. When we are upset we can make bad decisions. I wonder if he suceeded? I liked this chapter, I thought you went back to your more thoughtful prose and focusing on characters thoughts and feelings like the really great parts of your previous story. I am sorry that you are being pestered by some idiot, but don't let them taint the story for you if you really want to finish it. I hope you had a safe journey back to Canada and good luck in the New Year! (it is just "in-laws" and mother in law or father in law etc when refering to specific person.

I am so disgusted that some ppl would send you an e-mail like that! And I wouldn't be suprised is you don't want to write anymore because these e-mails would personally push me in the other direction! Seriously your family comes first. What your write is hobby. Its not your fault you have a life! I like to think most of us do!

Anyway onto the story I'm loving it! Yuki is realising how much shu -chan means to him. I was confusing myself at the flashbacks parts but I got there eventually! Write at your own pace! If they are real fans of your story they can wait.

That person is just being stupid. "Can't understnad what you're writing" what a bunch of crap. Obviously they can read it just fine if they're pestering you for an update. If I didn't know Japanese and Chinese are your mother languages I would say English is you first language. Hell, some English speaking people write horribly and I wonder is English their native language. Real life and your family does get in the way and sometimes make you stop writing period. Clearly this person has no real life and they haven't written anything or they would know how hard it is to come up with ideas for a chapter if it isn't already outlined somewhere. Just ignore idiots like that. If it looks like a flame just delete without even reading the whole thing.

Anyway, I do hope you continue this fic. I and and many other people like it very much. I don't know about the allergies but you could have just put in-laws instead of family in laws. You only put a word in front of in-laws when it's mother, father, sister, or brother but if it's just family you can say in-laws and people will know what you mean. I really hope you continue!

DOn't you dare abandon it!! I love it!! Take some time to get back into it if you need it and don't listen to stupid flamers who don't even give criticism that helps

xoxo
Catie

NO! DON'T STOP WRITING! PLEASE! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! *cries* SHUICHI CAN'T DIE!!!!!!!

i'm so glad you updated.
i love this story
just ignore those assholes that are flaming you
what do they know
i love your story and you have great writing and english skills.
please oh please continue
it usually helps me think of new ideas for my stories if i watch an anime or read a manga other than Gravitation.
oh how was your plane trip?

I've gotta tell you that your story is fantastic.So, just ignore those flamers and tell them to fuck off.Seriously,if they hate your story,then don't bother flaming.Tell them to shut the fuck up till they can write a better story than yours.Or ask them to write a story in Japanese.Let's see how perfect their story can be.Your English is fine.Nobody's perfect.Even i'm foreign,and i don't speak good English.Take your time writing the next chapter,the wait is worth it.But,don't kill Shuichi,or i'll kill you!!Lol.Just kidding.And please,finish the story,don't abandon it.Oh,and congratulations on your father.This was the perfect timing for an update,a Christmas and birthday present in one.^_^Good luck with your next chapter.I'm hoping for a happy ending for this story*i'm hinting*Take care and merry christmas!

Thank-you for posting a new chapter, I love reading the story I find it very interesting and worth the time and effort it takes to write it....your a very talented writer..slow post only make reading the story that much better get to refresh your memory on the greatness of a story lol....thank-you again...

...what jerks. Whether it's one person or one dozen, I'm sorry people are being so horribly rude to you. If they don't like something, they shouldn't read it. Whether you give up on the story or continue it is your decision, but I want you to know that I like it. Your English is fine. It's not perfect, but it's fine, and it's better than the writing of several native English speakers, including one of my roommates. Your ability to tell a STORY, to string together plot and characterization, is better than the writing of BOTH my roommates. I like your story enough to check back, and check back, and check back, and to read it whenever I see it. I like it enough to read it even though I usually don't like this sort of story... life is usually complicated enough without reading about fictional people's angst. ^^;;

Congratulations on your father, and on you. I hope you have a very, very merry Christmas.

Been there, done that, got the t-shirt. There's always some ill-mannered jerk who has to open his big mouth and make a creator's life miserable.

Whoever is responsible for that email should learn the difference between you're and your before he/she begins to insult someone else's grammar. Could your grammar be better? Of coursel I have yet to read A SINGLE POSTING ON ANY FF SITE by any author of any nationality that couldn't benefit from a good sound whipping from a copy editor. So what? FF is written by amateurs and never sees real copy editors.

Your story has a real charm, and what better way to practice a second language than by trying to do something as difficult as writing fiction? I'm personally trying to learn Japanese right now, and I'm telling you, I'm seriously impressed with your command of the English language.

I'm also charmed by your account of your time with your father and his reactions to your stories. How wonderful to have a parent with whom you can share this part of your life.

I know it's difficult, but writing past difficult moments is all part of writing. Speaking from experience, I'd suggest you try very hard to finish the story . . . no matter how long it takes. Don't let the bastards win, and give your characters the benefit of a resolution. Your muse will thank you for it!