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Hey there I just wanted to let you know that your story is awesome and whoever is sending flames can fuck off and die and burn in hell because they have no frikin right to be talking to you that way so to all the people who does the flaming CAN FUCK OFF as for you the author of this story take as long as you need because an author who takes breaks on stories are the best ones because they make sure the story is good and such just please promise me that this story will have a happy ending for Yuki and Shuichi thanks muches your story rocks and so do you merry christmas ^-^

How about you just ignore those idiots that are writing all those dumbass flames to you. Firstly, I myself am foreign, but I came to this country and know better english that most Americans will EVER know. Therefore, I understand some of the mistakes you're making from japanese as the language transfers over. If they said that they can't understand your writing sometimes, they are just stupid, because I understood it just fine. Maybe it's them that need to be taking extra English lessons. Furthermore, first they complain about you sucking at writing, but them they complain that you take over a month to update. This can only mean two things: a) while they have to be little bitches and complain about your story, they really do like it because you DO have talent, and your story IS very engaging, but they're too proud and insecure to actually admit that; and b) again, the story is actually very good, but their lives and so stupid and insignificant that they have to take it out on the foreigner to make themselves feel better. I have never seen such a blatant attack of racism in my life. It is people like them that give the U.S. a bad name, and it is disgusting. As for you losing inspiration, that's just impossible: your story is too promising. Why not using what these illiterate little punks are saying and turn it into anger. Then use this anger to make Eiri beat the shit out of Tohma or something :). Please contact me if you actually need help with motivation and everything, I love this story: the name I have given is my AIM screen name.

You HAVE to continue this story!! Whaah, don't stop it, please please please!!!
You're a great writer, don't care about some stupid flames!!

SO CONTINUE, no matter how long it takes to write a chap or two, okay?

I love this story and I think that many people do! ^_____^

oi! those ppl are just plain mean. gah i think your doin fine. tell them that if they dont like it they can just not read it. simple as that. its a free access and your not forcing them to read it. if they dont like it they should just ignore it and walk away. it just goes to show that they have never written anything good if they wrote anything at all and dont understand the hard time we authors have at writting things. they should be grateful your even gracing us with your ideas. so dear be at peace have a happy holidays and i do wish you the best of luck. also if you have trouble getting some ideas here is some helpful advice i got from a close friend; look to the readers who truly enjoy reading this fic ask them for ideas and help. also if you have problem with grammar dont sweat it firstly use a word processing program to check your work and then see if anyone would like to give you help and be a beta-reader who will correct any mistakes before it's posted. i do hope you continue and goodluck with everything. hugs!!

Yea, I would ignore that email. Obviously they like your story if they're so desperate for an update that they'd email you. It's like they're trying to insult you into an update. Anyways your story isn't bad, my advice would be to get a beta for the grammatical problems you have. It doesn't make the story unreadable, but it would be better without them. So yea, I hope you do keep writing despite the nasty emails your getting and I hope to see an update whenever you have one. I can understand having a life, I'm a beta, I don't even have to come up with anything to write, but I still find myself having trouble finding the time to sit down and edit the chapters. So yea, can't wait to see how the story goes and whether or not there is still a baby.

Flamers fucking suck! Never ever listen to them! It seems these flamers are forgetting the fact that authors are only human and not some form of super being, we do actually have lifes to get on with, my writting suffered for 2-3 years due to work and stress and i have only made a recent comback with a very short story. The chapters are short simply because my job has been so demanding recently. Die flamers die!

I do hope you decide to continue this story, i was enjoying reading it ^^

I hope your dad gets well soon also

*huggies and smoochies*

iggy the stoopid flamers! they dun o a good story when they c 1!!!! :) if that cant look past errors in the story then they should just stfu n lv... im glad u finally updated! n it did take a long time but im sure u have been bzy... i am 2 *sighs* stoopid life! *kicks it* NE WAYS! have a great christmas!!!!! and plezzzzzzzz update soon?!? i realllllly wanna kno wat happens!!!! again ty 4 the story! tc!!!

**mandi**

oh gosh!!this is a really beautiful story.i cried reading it.*sobs*i never really liked tohma,but now i find myself hating him.poor shu-chan.....please don't make him die in the next chapter!!

I love this! Although I am a bit (very) jealous you can speak Japanese. I want to learn it sooo badly... I hope your dad gets his surgery soon. Oh, yeah and I can't wait to find out what happens next! It just keeps getting better and better. I did wish the little notes (the meaning of some things) were at the bottom 'cause I don't know what you're defining at the begininng sometimes and I forget things like that easily and have to scroll back up to re-read the meaning. But I can deal.

WHAT HAS SHU-CHAN DONE?

*CRIES* My god my poor baby shu-chan. This is all your fault Yuki Eiri! My god if you wasn\'t so hot I\'d hurt you...a little.

Poor Shuichi... the baby what is going to happen???? *On tenderhooks*

Please update soon. WHAT A CLIFFIE!