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Hello! I really like how this sequel is turning out, with Yuki acting like a real person and everything with weakness and such. Just a small language error to point out in this chapter though. \'Crocodile tears\' actually refer to fake tears, and when you say someone cries crocodile tears, you\'re actually saying that the person is just faking his emotions and pretending to feel upset or sympathetic over something, and more often than not there is the malicious intent beneath it like actually laughing at the trouble the other party is in, or trying to garner sympathy for himself. Other than that, you\'ve got your grammar and language perfect. Hoping to read more of this soon. Cheers!

so cool so cool
i loved it
just like a chocolate cake warm and hot with that melted chocolate frosting on top and the warm chocolate in the center
ever have one? their at Applebees. it\'s one of their deserts.
mmm so good, just like this chapter.
hahaha i know i\'m a dork.
glad your dad\'s ok. man i\'d love to go to Japan but i want to learn the language first.
well update soon

Chpt 4: I\'m so glad your dad is doing well.. and reading your dad\'s sex scene should be interesting to say the least = its awesome that you have that type of relationship with your parents! I liked this chapter.. but I think Shu forgave Eiri a little too neatly, I dunno I think there should be a lot more fallout with him fucking his rapist but eh.. we\'ll see...

wow!!!!!!!
it hurts!!! well shuichi is a real martyr hm. its great i love your story

h my gosh! that is soo sad..yuki is an inconsiderate dick sometimes... shu is sooo much more cuter then that other one.

I hope everything is going well with your father. I know how it feels.

Anyway Great chappie! It\'s just morning sickness, heh. lol.

I got a horrible feeling about Tohma but I always have.

Can\'t wait for the next chappie.

YAY sequel.......I love your story, it is so fun (and sad) to read.......I only found both stories last night and I just couldn\'t stop reading untill i was finished lol....I hope you dad is ok :(

wow that was too much pain there... my heart goes to shuichi i hope you make something so it would be a bit light... i\'m starting to hate yuki much and tohma...
god how could they hurt shuichi like that...
as you can see i felt the emotions so i guess you are that GOOD... keep it up cause eventhough your fic are a bit sad it still brighten my days when i read a good fic...
what is your plan? how do plan to end it? hope the ending still be yuki and shuichi
thank you

Aw D: Really? I do hope it\'s nothing serious as well and I hope you\'ll be back soon. Good luck and stay safe, kay :3 Tell him I say hi =O

yay! a new chapter! Thank you thank you thank you. Can\'t wait for the next update. I just love reading your work.