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October 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Strange. I read only two chapters ... well more was not available ... however ... I really do like it and have to agree that your sudden stop of telling is cruel. It made me think and agree in more than one way with you.
I like the style you're telling this story it's ... hm how to say ... it sounds mature and soft, sensible and senitive.
What I like the most I think is the fact that you don't rush in your story-telling because it doesn't matter if this is fanfiction or not but a story needs a plot and not just sex ... at least that is what I think and yours has one even if not shown fully by now.
I can only hope that you update this some day.
I like the style you're telling this story it's ... hm how to say ... it sounds mature and soft, sensible and senitive.
What I like the most I think is the fact that you don't rush in your story-telling because it doesn't matter if this is fanfiction or not but a story needs a plot and not just sex ... at least that is what I think and yours has one even if not shown fully by now.
I can only hope that you update this some day.
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you haven't dropped his story it looks like it will be a very good one and it already has a good start. I hope you continue it at some time.
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November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh that was so sweet and so sad at the same time
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi--I'd like to read the rest some day. This was a really good start. If you have an email list for updates, please put me on it. Thanks for posting!
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is awsome. I hope you plan on writing more. It would really bite for you to end it there,even though you haven't updated in a while.
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You do plan on continuing this, right? Right? Becaue if you don't ... argh. This is such a wonderful story! And well-written, too, which is so rare in fanfiction. The characters are very well-drawn and so much like in the manga/anime. Plus, it's an interesting, alluring plot you've going here. It would be a crime to abandon it. So, please, please do continue, and soon. I'd love to read more, and I'm so curious about what is in the package!!
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... you are so crule to the people that read your stories. What's in the box? Will they get together? You're going to kill me this way. PLZ update soon I would hate to see this story go unfinshed.
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok, that is just cruel, leaving me hanging like that. *pouts* You have to update soon, or I swear I will never forgive you!
Broken Wings
Broken Wings
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
=0 *waves arms about* z0mg! T__T
>.< Poor Ritsuka!!! ;-; Good cliff-hanger
xD good thing theres a second chapter up! *scurries off to read it*
<3 Great work~~
>.< Poor Ritsuka!!! ;-; Good cliff-hanger
xD good thing theres a second chapter up! *scurries off to read it*
<3 Great work~~
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*pain pain* ne, ne, it hurts. *sobs*. Ah, that chapter was really angsty. Please update soon~ I want to see Ristuka-kun happy =]