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for Patience vs. Persistence

by onlyindreams

person Aziza Khepri
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is an awesome ff, and you are evil for ending it there, yet genus, because it makes the reader stop and whine for more. so lol i cant wait till you update, i love Loveless, it's in the top five of my faveortie anime. Cant wait until you update!!!
person gingitsune
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You ARE going to update, aren't you? I really hope you do, your story is addicting. I really want to read more. That's one of the few stories where Soubi ACTUALLY turns Ritsuka down and sticks with it...so far anyways. Please, please update!!
person Anon
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay, so i read this when aff.net was still in the archive only state and i\'ve been WAITING to review! this story is so KICK ASS! i mean........ oh my god, so freakin good! i really, really, REALLY can\'t wait till the next chapter! update soon! i\'m dying!!!!!!
person kimper
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. nicely done! i can't wait to see what happens next!
person iie
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
uwaaaah!!! I feel so sad for Ritsuka! Poor boy, so needy, but denied. Not to mention insecure. To feel unwanted and undesirable, especially for Ritsuka, it must be very painful. I'm really curious as to how you're going to solve this problem. Will Soubi give in? He obviously didn't waver at all when faced with a very "ready" Ritsuka. Will he use some kind of spell? I want to know! Your story is very interesting, and I think you're doing a great job, especially without a Beta. I hope you will post soon! Good Luck!
person Sarisia
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yaa! What a horrible place to leave me hanging! :(
Your writing is lovely and well, sexy as all hell. I love the bit you had with Ritsuka's tail. I wouldn't have thought of it myself. Please continue this soon!
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness you can\'t stop there!!! The characters are so perfect and the writing is beautiful. I like how not everything is perfect because nothing is. First love is awkward and all that endearing for it. I really do hope you update this.
person SetoKaibaWheeler
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i\'m not signed in but this is one of the nicest, cool stories that i\'ve read for Loveless. I just got into loveless last week, so i\'m still confused about it but it\'s a pretty good story.
person yume
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story and I am really looking forward to reading more of it.
The storyline is amazing....and you have kept them soooo in character.
Please write more and update soon
Yume
person Haru
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are soooo mean!!!!
Please, pretty please Keep writting, it´s so good! Ritsuka is so perfect like you do! Hehhehehe, What soubi will do? Why can´t they talk like normal people, né?
ja né!

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