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for Patience vs. Persistence

by onlyindreams

person Nijel
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story. You wrote exactly what I thought Soubi would do. Soubi can be a tease, though sometimes I wonder if he means it. It really seemed like you followed the story from the anime. But I hate you for the cliffhanger. Kidding. That was great I will be looking for the next chapter
person ladygizarme
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww, that was a sweet yet frustrating chapter.. i loved the tail part ^__^ but poor ritsuka, feeling rejected by soubi... what\'s soubi\'s gift i wonder? i can\'t wait to see how you progress this.. i look forward to the next chapter!
person cinque
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeahh finaly a new Loveless story! I hope Ritsuka will get his Sobi and dont have to suffer to much. Keep going
Love ya
person vbv
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update, i love your story, it\'s so beautiful and hot!
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I absolutly LOVE this story. It has so much feeling in it! It is so hard to find a really good Soubi and Ritsuka fanfic that has nothing to do with Semi. I beg of you to continue and update as soon as possible. I really can\'t wait to see the tention rise between these two characters! Bravo, bravo, please update!

If it is possible could you please send me a review when you update? My e-mail is listed above.
person Rubik\'s Cube Cat
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
T^T This is so good! I love how in touch you are with Ritsuka\'s emotions. So angsty, that boy. But we loves him! Oh, and IMO, I don\'t really think 14 is grounds for shota...but I suppose I can see the need for a warning. ^^; Looking forward to more!
person Razz
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o darling, it\'s to much suspense!! wonderful fic ;) you portray the characters perfectly and the story... i could so see this happening!! x3 i love it love it love it!! *squeal* ....*blush*......*cough* well... anways, please update soon and i will be sure to read ;)
person Shantal
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, one of the few Loveless stories that are not only interesting, but believable, too. Great work. Hope to read more soon.
person Frost
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow Thats was very fun.....I love your writing style it just seems to flow so well.....Keep it up I can\'t wait for an update :)
person Ashcat
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chpt 2: wow, this story is getting good! I like the tension and issue\'s you\'ve raised in this chapter! So is Soubi attracted to Ritsuka at all sexually? Maybe not, maybe just that he\'s his sacrifice like you said eh? Very interesting idea! Please continue soon!

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