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for Patience vs. Persistence

by onlyindreams

schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No! Please update soon! I feel sorry for the confused Ritsuka *sniffles*. I\'m glad to see that Soubi has some morals, but he better break them soon if he doesn\'t want to hurt Ritsuka\'s feelings and risk loosing the popular cutie.
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very promising beginning, you paint very beautiful images with your words and I\'m glad you made Ritska a bit older. I\'m looking forward to more.
person katie
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww. Poor Ritsuka. Damn that Soubi. Anyway great fic. Can\'t wait to read more.
person B
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww. I can\'t believe youleft it like that. Now I\'m sitting here sniffing. Although it could be a combination of the cold and the way you left your story hanging! I love it please update soon. Don\'t leave Ritsuka like that for a long time. That\'s just to mean.
person ladygizarme
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww soubi where are you? you need to come to ritsuka!!! this is a good start, i like it, i hope you have more soon ^__^
person Ashcat
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I like your fic so far.. poor ritsuka! Your dialogue is good and I think your Ritsuka is spot on! I\'m glad that your making him older than 14, b/c even that young seems pretty creepy! Can\'t wait for you to update!

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