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for Strawberries and Cream

by loche606

person ladygizarme
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aahaahaahaa!! that was great dude, eiji is *so* all about pda, nya? and ryoma *so* isn\'t, but he is a *lil* bit to make eiji happy ^__^ awwww!!! and allllllllll the momo/kaidoh stuff had me CRACKING up!! *especially* the continued use of their lunchtime fight and eiji catching them in the bush during their \"chance meeting\" heehee... but then DOOOOOOOOD, eiji/ryoma swing was veeerrrrrryyyy.... ooooooohhhhh *drools* veeeeerrrrrrryyyyyyy oooooooohhhhhhhh!! and afterwards.. moooorrrreeeee oooohhhhh eiji\'s so sweet *happy sigh* can\'t wait to see how ryoma takes care of him next time ^___^

praise tezzie, ryoma and fuji, mada mada dane! walk the path of moses-eiji and st. yukimura!
*huggles*

~crys
person \'Gumi
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not one for the EijixRyoma pairing, but this one is quite cute. Keep up the good work. There\'s more to come, yes?

And maybe there could be a secondary pairing of TakeshixKaoru...maybe? *looks hopeful*
person ladygizarme
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it i like it!!!!! awwww eiji and ryoma are soooooo cute dude soooooo cute!!! ahh i love them to death!! *huggles the cute couple* this whole chapter was great, and you know how much i was laughing... especially the momo-kaidoh fighting, and the fact they do that SAME thing at lunch every day heehee! and the momo-ryoma eating challenge was great.. i bet momo went and got himself some meat buns and ice cream after he left ryoma at the burger place lol... and eiji and ryoma in eiji\'s bush hiding spot haha!! greatness, dude, greatness... ahhh i can\'t wait for the next one, i hope you write it sooooon ^__^

*glomps* love ya, praise tezzie
~ crys
person Houseki
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yayy!! so glad you kept on with it! Another great chap..so kawaii w/ momo and ryo...they\'re really a great pair up of friends...although, i\'m wondering if you\'re gonna build anything w/ the momo/kaidoh relationship hehe would be interesting, espeically comin from you ^__~ i was worried eiji wouldn\'t make an appearance ths time around! lol but guess you saved the best for last *grins* their lil scene was kawaii..can\'t wait for more babe! Love ya always!

MadA madA dane!

Nic
person LosingGrip
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have only one thing to say to you.....................................If you don\'t update this story so help me I\'ll throttle you to high heaven, do I make myself clear? Good, now I happen to like this story so update soon \'K, *giggles* Bye.
person Jonquina
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eagerly awaiting for the next chapter...;)
person yaoi-pervert
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Complete it..!! That\'s all I got to say...
I really loved the pairing, and it is a good story..
Update soon
person Houseki
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Random thought: I had a strawberry-banana smoothie with whip cream today *smriks* lmao ok enough of that :p

That was so kawaii! Such a diff pairing! It was light and sweet and fun! Loved the Kaidoh/Momo interaction-those two kill me hehe i want to see how their relationship blossoms Ren!! so you shall continue this fic, b/c ur mistress says so ^__~ Just another sugoi fic by my fav Ren! Keep it up girl, you rock! Hugs and kisses!

Praise the Trinity ~Made made dane~

Nic
person ladygizarme
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
complete it, complete it!! motto motto motto!!! ahh kawaii, you know what i loved since i told you, but just to reiterate: kawaii on fuji/taka bein\' an item, lol @ kaidoh\'s hiss, lol @ kaidoh and momo\'s arguing, lol @ horio and comparing him to atobe (yes, i know you have to throw in how much of a pompous bastard the incubus is :p), lamo @ eiji AND momo glomping ryoma, lamo @ eiji pouncing ryoma when he just stood up in the strawberry patch (STILL have the image of tigger-eiji dude, omtezzie!!), ahh so sweet with eiji only wanting to show ryoma the strawberry patch, and them watching the sunset and kissing sweetly was soooo *hearteyes* and you better write more soon woman!!

love ya! *glomps tigger-eiji style* heehee *laugh also said eiji style* ^__~ praise tezzie, ryoma and fuji, and many thanks to moses-eiji!! mada mada dane

~ crys

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