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for Unforgiving Dawn

by YaoiMuffin

person Noriko_Sakuma
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! Some SanLu action in this chappie weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee~ :dance:

YESS tasty threesome in next chappie!!! OMG WEEEEEEE!!! x3 I love you, did you knew that ;D I was so happy to see this fic actualized, this definetly made my day worth xD

Evil cliffies!! Oh well I\'ll wait for the next chap patiently *.*
person NebuNeferu
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ops, forgot to say one more thing. YOU\'LL WRITE THREESOME? OMFG!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOTHING CAN MAKE MY DAY HAPPIER BUT TO SEE THIS WONDERFUL AND DELICIOUS STORY!!!! I hope the site I gave you will give you enough inspiration to write the threesome ;) and tell me what you think of the site ok
person Delay
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, i couldn\'t lett you did I? and the last chapter made it al just to good!! It was so cute to read!
Poor luffy, guess zoro had to come up with the plan.. mmmmmm.. lemon..... haha.. how will luffy react?!
I\'ll be waiting.......
person NebuNeferu
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BANZAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY, YOU DID IT!!! SANJI KISS LUFFY *Nosebleed* I can\'t take it anymore *Sigh and faint from blood lost*

*Suddenly recover* Oh yeah, I forgot ^_^ Here\'s something delicious I want you to see \"http://satsuki.cside.com/cgi/theme/view.cgi?mode=menu\". You probably seen it before, but if you haven\'t, please go see and enjoy *evil smile*

Your story IS SO COOL!!!!!!! SUPER DUPER LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Ebony
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
“What if Luffy didn’t have to choose?”

And in that moment I fell in love with Zoro. Yeah I don\'t blame you for hating Nami just a little, I do too. But that b/c she treats Sanji like crude most of the time. and maybe, just maybe I\'m jealose, maybe ;). I can\'t wait for the next chapter, but for the love of god don\'t rush it! One bad lemon can ruin a very good story and this is a very good story. So, I can wait for a good lemon:)

much love
Ebby
person Delay
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It doesn\'t matter it isn\'t a sanjixzoro, it\'s still cute! Keep updating, cuz i\'ll be waiting!
person NebuNeferu
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I promise if you give a Sanji/Luffy scene in the next chapter, I\'ll give you something delicious to see *evil smile* I JUST HAVE TO GIVE YOU SINCE YOUR STORY IS SO DELICIOUS!!!!! UPDATE ASAP OK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Ebony
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn it Sanji you better fucking tell him!!!! And I want to at the least some making out when you do!!!!

Anyway, yeah, sorry had to say that. How are you doing? Good, i hope. You know me, crazy little fan girl, all I really want is some smut. In return I review! I would like to take a small moment to say your story makes me very happy. :)

Much love
Ebby
person lemon
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story~^^\"
They\'re like my top 3 favorite characters in One Piece, even though my favorite is ZoroxSanji,
but I\'m always amused to see any interaction involving the three of them.XD (Sounds fun to begin with)
And I must add...Threesome rocks!
person Kuragari Okami
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You wanted comments so here\'s one.....errrr....I love the fic and the concept... but it could\'ve done without the Nami bashing earlier...she\'s cool and really isn\'t using Sanji, she cares for everyone in the crew...she\'s just being nice and polite to Sanji for fawning over her so much....nothin\' wrong with that....N*E*ways I still love your ficcy and update soon! much lurv!>^.^<.....

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