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for Unforgiving Dawn

by YaoiMuffin

person Noriko_Sakuma
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More onegai!! XD (mean, mean cliffies!! >.<)

When I saw you were update I was like *squeeeeeeeeeeeaaaal* >w<

Definetly, you made my day xD
person Ebony
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"this will become a threesome\"

T.T I love you.

Nice chapter. I can really feel for Luffy, it hard to love so one and have some one come onto you. It becomes hard to tell the person \'no\' because your just so damn confused... love is a bitch.

plz update soon!
person Delay
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you say this is a luffyxsanji luffyxzoro but is it olso a zoroxsanji?
that would be cool !
person Noriko_Sakuma
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Threesome!! HELL YEAH! >D

Curious thing isn that I didn\'t like threesomes until I watch One Piece, those Tree are the ONLY threesome I love >w<

Poor Zoro, finally decide to make his move and this happened! But he\'ll be happy in the end mwahahaha <.< >.>

Continue onegai!!! >w<
person NebuNeferu
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t believe that Luffy actually has 2 HOT guys kneeling all over him for lust and love, and he DIDN\'T REALIZE OR NOTICE???? I just LOVE this story, update ASAP ok ^_~
person NebuNeferu
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh one more thing, make this a threesome ok. It\'ll be AWSOME!!!! Three hot guys f***ing...*drool*
person GlidedLilyu
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Everyone wants One Piece of the Staw Hat\'s ass! Poor Zoro and Sanji both caught up in the love for Luffy. Nice job.
person yuugakohakusrembrance
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting very interesting...update soon! *evil cliffhangers*
person Kuragari Okami
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OI! Love the fic please update soon!>^.^<...
person Ebony
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That whole {tell him!} part, i\'ve done that so many times. Poor Sanji-kun. I find that sooner or later I just can\'t take it any more so i avoid the person like the pleague, yeah. I love this story. please update.

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