rate_review Reviews

I want the last 5 mins of my life back. You suck please do not write anymore.

unfortunately, i agree with Anon. I wouldn\'t go so far as to tell you to stop writing stories, i would just ask that you try a little harder in the future. this story had the potential to be good, but 1) the sex was too short, and undetailed, and 2) sex and script format don\'t usually mix. if you ask the people who run this website, or even a few authors, i\'m sure they\'ed be happy to give you a few tips.