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for Ryuichi\'s playtime

by darknesslefoxhaaru

person Kasey
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think I read this before but I dont think I read it all the way through...WOAH
person Me
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
May I suggest that next time you dont do it as an internet conversation?
person xXShadowRiderXx
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is barely legible. Because it is in chatspeak/L337 it is not something people will stick around to read at all because it can be hard on the eyes and gets confusing because the words mesh together. There are huge bits of OOC and this isn\'t considered a story, it should be fixed into something that deals with your RP but also has a story persona to it instead of just two people RPing.
person Anon
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you suck.. that is not a story its a convo
person me
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this made verry little sense
person Deity
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was hard to understand. Hardly understood it. Heh, well, other than that is was good, I think.....It depends on if I read it right. I think I pretty much gathered you all were chatting, right. Either that, and I\'m slow, or I just read everything you wrote wrong.........God, I feel really dumb.

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